[Report This]Date: 07-14-05 - 02:36 pm Title: The Odalisque
Well, after reading both chapters I had to take some time to think about the ending. I'd have to say if you'd ended it two chapters ago I would have been satisfied and hopeful for a sequel but the next two chapters pretty much acted like a sequel. It's very ambiguous though I loved the whole Creed, bon bon and robe part. Ambiguous but finished nonetheless. She's happy so does she want him now? He's there and that says so much. Very ambiguous. Maybe I'm just sad to see this story come to an end.
[Report This]Date: 07-13-05 - 05:30 am Title: The Odalisque
............................. Well what an ending. I must say bravo! This has been one of my more favorite reads as far as rolo is concerned. This was an experience............... I must say I am sad that it's done. I do wish though that you write a sequel to this. A pick up from where this left off. Those ideas you had for this fic could always be applied in some way to a sequel. I hope you do. Well any way I had a great time with fic, it has been my pleasure reading. Goood, Great, Damn Fine job on this fic.
[Report This]Date: 07-13-05 - 03:21 am Title: The Odalisque
Nice story, but I found the ending to be awkward...has she moved on , or is she calling out to him to come to her and then are they together? are you planning on a sequal?
[Report This]Date: 07-13-05 - 03:16 am Title: The Odalisque
You're a cruel, cruel one. I'm devastated... utterly devastated. ::sniffs:: What will I do now?? I desperately want more!!! I'm like a crack addict that's gone cold turkey... ::twitches:: I'll be fine... I think.
[Report This]Date: 07-13-05 - 03:15 am Title: The Odalisque
Ummm...speechless...Wow! ::clapping:: :D perfect ending for this story.
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