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Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-04 - 06:28 am Title: El Anhelo

This update was WELL WORTH THE WAIT! (And do not even get me started on Nina Simone. I'm a hair pulling groupie!) I love getting into a man's mind. Our seeing where he was in the relationship with both women was wonderful. What fascinates him about both women, why one over the other. You show and don't tell, I love it. How it went south at the confrontation, very good. How will Logan get past this huge obstacle of his inability to show feelings? Can't wait to see. Nice touch with the L-O-G-A-N. Nice little guy thing that he did without her knowing, yet another sign of his ambivalence. Excellent. Can't wait for more. Also, please give a little color on the chapter titles. Would love to know how and why you named them so...

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-04 - 03:59 am Title: El Anhelo

OMG!!! You finally UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! We're finally getting somewhere as far as Logan is concerned!!! He almost actually told her how he felt!!!! That's one step closer!!!! Tempest, I BEG of you, PLEASE update A.S.A.P. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-13-04 - 09:06 pm Title: El Desafío

*Begs on hands and knees* More please! Pretty please with large dollops of sugar on top. Seriously, I love this.

Reviewer: Saki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-04 - 10:20 pm Title: El Desafío

Oh my poor heart! This story is wonderful and daring and sexy and you're killing me with the suspense.So glad you did this chapter from Logan's POV. It was awesome. Please, I need to know what Logan's going to do!! Update please!!

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-11-04 - 02:22 am Title: El Desafío

OMG! you updated! It's about time we see what goes on in Logan's head. He better take some serious action real soon. Great as always.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-04 - 01:35 am Title: El Desafío

Loved it Devi!!! And this: "He sounded like a motivational speaker on crack." made me laugh after a day with my niece and nephew ;) Can't wait to read more!!!!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-04 - 11:05 pm Title: El Desafío

Oh Yeah...an update!!! What can I say, I absolutely love this story. The unexpected perspective change was nice. I was really wondering how Logan felt about he and 'Ro's relationship. Nice to see that it's not just casual for him either. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :-)

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-04 - 02:33 pm Title: El Desafío

So I get to the first paragraph and I say to myself, "Self, ", "Yes?" I answer. "This is freakin genious!" After all this time and getting us all into this woman's story, you switch perspective on us to fill in the holes of Logan's behaviour. Seeing her through his eyes. Damn! You are good. It's almost worth THE LONG AGONIZING WAIT FOR THE UPDATE. What a cruel, cruel weaver of webs you are! DigT, I'm loving this. I love male perspective. And I love how you almost perfectly melded the character/relationship dynamics of X-Men into this AU. Absolutely! Keep it coming!

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-09-04 - 01:18 pm Title: El Desafío

I'm convinced that you are evil, evil I say. A demon sent to torture us all:( That was Wonderful, as I knew it would be, too dang short for my taste but you know me...Need lots more to make me happy:D Seriously, it was perfection...always wondered what brought those to to that storeroom:) Great writing as always, but you do realize I'll hav eto start hounding you even more now, since it was so very good??

Reviewer: Summers Eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-04 - 05:48 pm Title: The Resolution

Logan better get his act together before he loses the best thing to happen to him. Hmm, maybe he should? Maybe Ororo should leave his ass and go off with that guy who likes her and make Logan suffer. Have HIM crawling back! Anyway, incredible story. One of your best.

Reviewer: Darlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-23-04 - 08:42 pm Title: The Resolution

Okay, I have to say that when I saw you updated it just made my day. I was so excited that I had to stop working in order to get my fix. I reread chapter 5 to drag out my enjoyment and I’m so glad I did. As I started to read chapter 6 you had me intrigued, then laughing, and then furious to the point where I was mumbling 'I hate that man!' repeatedly and mind you I'm at work but I HATE THAT MAN! You made me feel as if I was Ororo and Logan had screwed me over with Jean. And man did that hurt! I've never read anything as powerful as this story where you make a reader feel so much. It takes a very talented author to make a person feel so strongly. You’ve made me dislike a character that to me can do almost no wrong and he so belongs with Ororo. It was as if he was breaking my heart just as he was breaking Ororo’s. Or is he? I’m so curious as to see where you’re taking this. Joaquin or Logan, stay or go? It’s just full of mystery. I absolutely LOVE this story! I love it! Now there's another wonderful writer, Skyz, who said she'd be happy to beta for you. She has helped me a few times and though she writes mostly Buffy she does enjoy RoLo fics and Ororo and Remy fics (she has one she never finished on fanfict under the penname Skyz) and she's pretty competent. Her e-mail address is Skyz20000@aol.com if you want to get in touch with her. Let me end with saying that the long wait for you to update was well worth it. If this is a filler chapter then the next chapter has to be incredible and how cool is that? This story just keeps getting better and better! :D

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-04 - 06:45 pm Title: The Resolution

Alright, I may have to find you and exact some retirbution if you continue to keep me on hold any longer. This story is excellent and compelling. I'm glad the rival for Logan's affections is some mysterious Spanish guy and not Freakin Forge. But you, me and my foot may have a meeting if you keep me in agony and suspense any longer... in the most respectful way I can say. Last thought... the only thing better than PWOP is PWP... nuff said!

Reviewer: Tyronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-14-04 - 10:31 pm Title: The Resolution

Good story. I am not good at fan fics myself, but i like to write other things. I almost want that Joaquín guy to get in the end the way this story is going. Much love. : )

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-04 - 11:40 pm Title: The Date

Fantastic! I could read this over and over.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-04 - 11:37 pm Title: The Resolution

Damn that's good stuff. I wanna happy ending..please? =D

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