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Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-05 - 03:38 pm Title: El Visitante

Another great chapter!!! I am willing to ignore the grammatical mistakes because it's you and you updated!! Couldn't care about anything else!! Wonderful job please please please please update ASAP!!!!! :-D I read your A/N, by the way, and I am convinced that you were not the in the right frame of mind when you wrote that note and are just kidding... at least I believe that in my own little world! :-P Keep it up!!!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-05 - 03:16 am Title: El Visitante

I loved this chapter! Yukio shows up, Ororo’s happy for a change, I’m thinking she doesn’t need that bastard anyway and then boom! Yukio’s got Ro realizing she does want Logan and I want her to want him but then he sends her packing with his attitude and I’m right back to thinking what a bastard only he wants more and so does she. I love it. Kinda feel sorry for Joaquin but it’s a RoLo life. You are so good to update while away – spoiling us. Hope you’re having a good trip.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-05 - 01:05 am Title: El Visitante

Oh why can't they just get it together...lol. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Even when "much doesn't happen" as you put it, it is still amazing. Always well written, even with mistakes :::wink:::

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-05 - 04:32 pm Title: El Visitante

Yeaaay!! An update, bless you tempest!! I'll take a gateway chapter, I'll take anything you write down! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-05 - 01:42 am Title: The Plan

Come back. We need an update. As in right now.

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-05 - 02:45 am Title: The Plan

OMG, that was so deep. I can't believe Jean would do all that. She is such a bitch! She shouldn't have had an affair in the first place! Damn I just don't know how this fic is going to continue but please don't keep me waiting! Update A.S.A.P.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-05 - 10:38 am Title: The Plan

Sheesh. Bitch much? Update soon

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-05 - 09:07 pm Title: The Plan

This is the first time I have really felt for Logan. Before I felt kind-of bad for him because I knew he was hurting, but this chapter really let you see how all this was weighing on him too. Excellent job. I really can't wait to see how all this goes. Not only are you story plots excellent, you develop your characters so well....and the combination is just magical.

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-05 - 05:39 pm Title: The Plan

Damn. I was hoping he would do that, tell her to get the f' out. She deserves it. I'm actually starting to feel for him. Not enough to make me want Ororo to forgive him, but nobody deserves that. That sneaky heifer! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-05 - 01:40 pm Title: The Plan

I am chewing my lower lip raw thanks to you! ::laughs:: Keep it up! Congratulations, by the way!! I have two small children of my own and all I can say is that they make life VERY interesting :)... I hope you get the chance to update while traveling, but if not i will anxiously await your return.

Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-05 - 06:39 am Title: The Plan

and huge congratulations to you! :o)

Reviewer: Lady Dreamwalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-05 - 06:37 am Title: The Plan

I'm feeling so sorry for Logan right now! Even if he had it comming, I don't think he deserves that kind of treatment from any woman. What a slut Jean is! She should be grateful he wanted to acknowledge that child. And Ororo needs to start trusting hunky Logan or she will eventually hurt sweet Joaquin. I neeed to know how this will end, so whip your muse and write on despite you being out of town! *lol*

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-05 - 09:49 am Title: La Revelación

I wondered what was up with all these stories with pregnant women! The details were so exact that I thought, 'Hmm, she must have first hand experience.' And now I see my instincts were right! I'm very happy for you. Now you'll have to get all your stories finished because free time is hard to find once the little ones start cooing. So! You know I loved this chapter.

Reviewer: Mon-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-11-05 - 03:50 am Title: La Revelación

Awwwwwww! You're having a baby! Would that make it a mini-Tempest or a Tempest in a teapot. =p lol I am so glad to see that you updated this story so soon. What does this mean now? Logan has thrown in the towel? No can't be. Why is Ororo being so difficult? This is drving me nuts.

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-05 - 09:54 pm Title: La Revelación

Oh, Drama! Ororo needs to hop on the next thing smokin' to Spain. These people have issues. I can't pretend I don't understand Jean because if I was her I'd be pissed too, but she really can't be mad. She's married, and if she'd just listen she'd find out that Ororo didn't even know about them at first. It's not even like Logan was Jean's boyfriend on the side. He was just sex. Maybe she can just tell Scott the truth, and move on.

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