man. you pack a whallop when you update.

You have me feeling sorry for Jean, which is rare, on this site! But I love all the little nuances, like Logan paring his team down to the dedicated few, and the conversations between Ororo and Scott in the car. Logan burning the picture makes the reader ache, but you can see why. For the moment, it's like, you want Ororo and Logan to eventually be together, but just not right now. They've both got bigger shit on their respective hands. I love that you can make us, the readers, feel like that. Great job.

Author's Response: :D Cee, thanks so much for the review. It's reviewers like you that "get" what i'm trying to convey that make continuing these not-for-profit (lol) fics so much fun and certainly give me pep to keep going when I hit a writer's block. I really appreciate the feedback!