I read this story that first time you put it up, I am not sure if I reviewed or not, but I will tell you that i've never forgotten this story. I loved it the first time around and I like it even more now. I'am a fan of Frank Miller's Sin City, and I like what you've taken and turned into a RoLo story. I am very excited that you decieded to try this story again. The writing is great, throughout the whole story and I seeing everything visually and was kinda upset I had to stop. Thanks for updating! Keep it up, I wanna see chapter two soon!! : )
- Roxxi

I have to say this was a strange story to come upon. A combination of two of my favorite loves RoLo stories and Sin City. Can't say enough how much I love Sin City. I'll probably go watch the Hartigan story after this in fact.

Anyway getting back to the actual story, there was some interesting liberties you decided to take from the original. Granted, I don't see Vic being the child molester sort, so its understandable.

All in all, I'll diffidently be looking for more from this later on. And I hope if anything this motivates you to finish the story. Later!