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Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-09 - 02:15 am Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

Yay, another update. Great chapter.
Loved the set up of each character, Scott is seems a little bit more laid back in this story even if he take a kick to a groin with saying anything, lol.
Love Logan! I want him to come and save me! : )

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-09 - 04:30 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

I've been waiting for an update of this! Loved this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-09 - 04:23 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

Keeping moving along with the second chapter. You have a few details that I loved. The origin of Logan's Wolverine name, I thought that was kind of clever. Not to mention a few key sentences of description, such as the light bulb color.

I honestly thought Ororo was going to ask to stay with Logan, until they capture the killer. But perhaps that comes in the future. Either way, some good stuff hon. Great to see you updated.

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-09 - 03:43 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me

Wow I like the way this is going - yeah she's a bit young so I wonder how we'll get around tht one - either it'll take longer to solve the case and she'll be the perfect age or . . . I don't know. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work.

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