Date: 04-22-09 - 02:15 am Title: Don't Let Him Get Me
Yay, another update. Great chapter.
Loved the set up of each character, Scott is seems a little bit more laid back in this story even if he take a kick to a groin with saying anything, lol.
Love Logan! I want him to come and save me! : )
Date: 04-19-09 - 04:30 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me
I've been waiting for an update of this! Loved this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 04-19-09 - 04:23 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me
Keeping moving along with the second chapter. You have a few details that I loved. The origin of Logan's Wolverine name, I thought that was kind of clever. Not to mention a few key sentences of description, such as the light bulb color.
I honestly thought Ororo was going to ask to stay with Logan, until they capture the killer. But perhaps that comes in the future. Either way, some good stuff hon. Great to see you updated.
Date: 04-19-09 - 03:43 pm Title: Don't Let Him Get Me
Wow I like the way this is going - yeah she's a bit young so I wonder how we'll get around tht one - either it'll take longer to solve the case and she'll be the perfect age or . . . I don't know. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the good work.