Date: 07-18-09 - 09:07 pm Title: Ponytail
Seriously!!! I was so into the almost kiss moment!!! Damn you JEAN!
Date: 07-08-09 - 09:47 pm Title: Ponytail
Oh do i hate jean gray!! I can't wait for the next chapter in this story. Thanks for the update!
Date: 07-08-09 - 04:51 am Title: Ponytail
Wow, talk about the cat getting let out of the bag. Everything is out in the open now. I really wonder what's going to happen with the Professor and the rest of them.
Not a bad chapter, had a few spelling errors. The think the word you were looking for was "quite" not "quit". Some other small things, no real biggie.
I have to agree with Cee, the Log-Ali exchange was hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks for catching those for me. Ive made those changes...I'll try not to do the "hot off the press" releases so much...lol
Date: 07-07-09 - 04:05 pm Title: Ponytail
aw, man, time for everything to hit the fan.
maybe if she'd summoned a fog first to cover her back, that guy wouldn't have caught up to her so easily. Darn it, Ororo! Way to have your snappy getaway interrupted!
This was good. I enjoyed it, as usual. I like the exchange between Logan and Ali, it was pretty believable.