Date: 06-04-09 - 02:59 am Title: Part I
Muy interesante...I cant to wait and see what he wants to go back too...I actually started writing a time piece myself, but wont post it until I finish my current fic. Nice set up...Im not gonna lie...I had to look up "ostentatious" though...Good word I think I'll use it in a sentence tomorrow and add it to my arsenal of vocabulary words...lol
Date: 05-31-09 - 04:35 pm Title: Part I
I read this over at ff.net but I didn't review because I was a little confused. I'm not at all sure who's who or what's what or where you're going with this but I am curious as it's totally unique and unique is what I enjoy most.
Date: 05-30-09 - 10:39 pm Title: Part I
so, is this Logan actually Logan Jr.?
I like the different tack you're taking with the time-traveling RoLo. Most "One Man's Worth" based stories are derivative and done to death, with rare exceptions. But you gave this one a good angle already. I also love any story with Forge in it. It's odd to see him helping the man who you kind of think of as Forge's romantic rival for Ororo, too.
one nitpick: change "unused" to "disuse." do a Word search for it in your document.