Reviews For Under The Weather
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Reviewer: Cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-22-09 - 01:36 pm Title: Prologue
Date: 06-22-09 - 01:36 pm Title: Prologue
This looks funny so far. I like the image of one of them stomping into the house after the other, muttering the whole way.
Couple of typos:
"We'll come home find of 'em dead." you forgot to add "one" to make it "one of 'em."
and:
Ororo shrugged not know why. This should be "not knowing why."
Other than that, this was good. Keep it going. Poor Logan and 'Ro will drive each other nuts. Always a good thing in fic.
Author's Response: Oh, man, I completely missed those two! thank you so much for pointing them out! And thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it! =]
Reviewer: cary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-22-09 - 02:53 am Title: Prologue
Date: 06-22-09 - 02:53 am Title: Prologue
bring on the shenanigans! i would like to see how this goes.
Author's Response: Heheh!!! I'm glad you liked it!
I'll update soon hopefully!
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