[Report This]Date: 04-11-11 - 07:15 am Title: Part 2 of chapter 10 A Hearts Release
Omg!!!!
This was so worth the wait. Logan is the man! When he so eloquently put Jean in her place,first my own jaw dropped,then when he was done I had a huge smile on my face. I really wanted Ororo to just let him say that they are together and tell Jean to take her skank ass home.
And the closing of the chapter with Logan saying there is no one else and Ro saying she loved him was fabulous. :)
Please update when you can.
Author's Response: Thanx for making me laugh with Jean's skank ass! Sorry for the wait, but thanks for understanding. Hope to post more frequently. I'm happy to know that others feel Logan should be portrayed more intelligently than he is elsewhere...ahem, that place shall remain nameless! :) Angel
[Report This]Date: 04-11-11 - 02:55 am Title: Part 2 of chapter 10 A Hearts Release
Love how he seems to know that she's got a problem and how to soothe it without words. Hope they stay together in the end. :)
Author's Response: Time will tell Lis. I know this story is simplistic and I'm glad you're reading it. Thanx.
[Report This]Date: 04-06-11 - 11:38 pm Title: Part 2 of chapter 10 A Hearts Release
Actually, it's funny that you mentioned Logan not being so dumb. I was going to include that in my review but didn't realize I had forgotten until I hit submit. I was just as proud as Ororo of Logan's little speech. My mom (who is a school teacher) has always told me that using big words doesn't make you wise but that it takes a truly intelligent person to take a complicated matter and break it down so that even a child can comprehend it. The fact that he is intelligent but chooses not to flaunt it over other people but chooses to be himself and is comfortable in his own skin makes him even sexier. So well done!!
Author's Response: I could drone on forever in reply to your wonderfully wise remarks, but you said all that needs saying, and very well I might add. Thank you AngelAloft
[Report This]Date: 04-06-11 - 03:43 pm Title: Part 2 of chapter 10 A Hearts Release
Ohhh, I'm glad you updated! While I am loving how explosive they come together in the heat of the moment, I really enjoyed the scene with Scott and Jean, there. Logan's intelligence really shouldn't come as a surprise to them, he couldn't have lived a hundred or so years if he was stupid now, could he? Heh.
And ha, I knew I was right when I said, in my last review, that they would one day have trouble giving up the house they worked so hard on. They've broken it in, for one thing. And I doubt anyone else would want to live in it after all the unspeakable things they've done in pretty much every room... ;)
Eagerly awaiting updates!
Author's Response: I'm trying to get posted as quick as I can now. Thanks for reading still and I value all input. Angel A
[Report This]Date: 04-05-11 - 11:57 pm Title: Part 2 of chapter 10 A Hearts Release
OK...my computer and I are currently not on speaking terms because it didn't notify me that you update this wonderful story. And what an update it was!!! Such a beautiful ending. And kudos to Storm for not smacking the red off of Jean's hair for her little snippy comments!!
Author's Response: QTFic, you guys reviewing this story are the greatest. You really keep me going in wanting to post these stories. Not to mention you all are hilarious as hell !!!! : ) No one has said anything about Logan not being so dumb yet though, throw back to ch. 2. Thanks for hanging in there with me and Foreve a Merry Christmas is getting posted, message recieved...lol
[Report This]Date: 04-05-11 - 07:32 pm Title: Part 2 of chapter 10 A Hearts Release
Damn that was erotic and emotinal all rolled into one all i can say is bravo, bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: victoria, victoria, victoria, you leave me with nothing to say except-------WOW ; )
Date: 04-05-11 - 05:37 am Title: Part 2 of chapter 10 A Hearts Release
It was worth the wait! We could have waited for years for a chapter like this!
Author's Response: Danielled, you soooo made my day!!! Thank you so much for your review. I don't ever want to make you wait so long. Back with more soon I promise...if you want.
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