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Reviewer: shejams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 03:16 pm Title: A Heart Betrayed

OMG! How the heck did I miss all these updates. I missed a whole lot.

Poor Ororo. Poor Scott; and I' m gonna say Poor Logan because I'm pretty sure that Jean did some sort of Jedi mind trick on him. (GRR)
I was absolutely speechless until this last chapter. My head's still spinning. How are you going to resolve this? I hope Scott kick her to the curb and Ororo, at least, punch her lights out. LOL

Anyway, this is more addictive than a soap opera. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Til next time


Author's Response: shejams, you are definitely a writers delight. Thank you for your reviews. I'm enjoying reading them more than I am writing the fic. :) Thank you so much for your encouragement, and for hanging in there with me. AngelAloft

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-04-11 - 01:55 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

To answer your question Angel, no my computer didn't alert me so there were not just one but TWO chapters I hadn't read. So I put it in time out for the rest of the night to learn it's lesson, but I think I'm the one that got punished on that one!!

Author's Response: Damn technology...LMAO!!! Maybe it was just a glitch. But it sounds like you bit it and it Bit back!!! LOL

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-11 - 04:10 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

Angel.....what the...I can't even....there are no words. My heart is about to fall out of my chest!!

Please, please tell me there will be an update soon, you can't leave us hanging here like this!!

Author's Response: LMAO QT, I do enjoy responding to you, you seem to be a kindred soul with the same feelings even as I write them. I promise more is on the way, wouldn't dream of leaving you hanging again. Angel A Oh yeah did your computer communicate with you this time on the update!? once again...LMAO

Reviewer: Britt1990 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-11 - 12:42 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

Oh My God, I just want to kick Jeans ass, she is such a bitch and to do that to your loyal friend, I hope you update real soon, nice job writing!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it Britt. Even as I write it, I want to kick her butt. No matter how it turns out you can do it, just close your eyes and imagine yourself or Ororo doing it, hey it's only fiction. :) Thanx for reading, more is on the way. Angel A

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-11 - 02:56 pm Title: A Heart Betrayed

My heart broke, but I know you will fix it. I hope it all comes out about how Jean messed with Logan's mind to lessen his attraction to 'Ro and increase his attraction to her. Jean is a mess and doesn't deserve anyone's pity.

Author's Response: Ang, your first sentence spoke volumes to me. Very sweetly put and I don't want to let you down. You say a lot with a few sentences. Message received. Angel A :)

Reviewer: Dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-11 - 05:19 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

Omg! I can't scream because I'm reading this at work but OMG!!!!! This is so gooood!
I just wanna beat the crap outta Jean for hurting every one the way she did because she was jeaulous of Ororo. I kinda hope you put something in about Ororo kicking her ass but Ororo is too much of lady to do that but maybe she can just lose her religion just little with Jean.
And Logan needs to just get down on his knees beg that woman for forgiveness till he's blue in the face. I want to see them together but I want some serious groveling from Logan.
Please update when you can cause the wait is killing. Lol
Thanks for a great read. :)

Author's Response: Hi 652, You are soooo good for my muse inspiration. You have been a constant with your right on ideas on this fic, and I love it. Believe it or not your reviews have helped shed a lot of light on where this fic is going. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, please keep reading. Angel A

Reviewer: Sasseb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-11 - 02:27 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

I hope you update soon this is a great story!

Author's Response: Sasseb, I am working on the re-write now. Before I can post I have to go over what I already have. More is on the way. Thanks for reading and taking time to leave feedback. Angel A

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-11 - 04:41 pm Title: A Heart Betrayed

finally scott had the fucking balls to call jean exactly what she is a low down conniving whore and logan cryiing and shit dont mean nothing he still disgust me!!!!!!!

Author's Response: You never fail to respond with just what you feel and I love it Victoria. You give me a lot of inspiration to continue. Thank you for your honesty and feeling.

Reviewer: DanielleduLys Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-30-11 - 03:26 pm Title: A Heart Betrayed

Poor Ro :(

Oh my, I'm hoping for a happy ending, but I don't know how we can have it now =(

Please keep going!

Author's Response: I promise I will finish this daniellled. And who knows what can happen from here. Your chit-chat had me laughing by the way. Thanks for being faithful with your encouragement to me. Angel A

Reviewer: elise50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05-30-11 - 08:49 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

I'm slowly coming into the community and starting to comment a few of the RoLo stories here. I've got to say this one is so great; it pulls out tons of emotions from the reader (at least for me) and I just love how it everything started off with a dog :)

I do have to admit though, especially after an Ororo v. Jean debate with a friend on FB (I know lol) that reading this section ripped my heart to shreds.

I'm actually really interested in seeing how you pull Ororo and Logan back together (if that's what you've got planned). Logan's gotten himself into a situation that seems almost impossible to fix (as much as I love the guy, he gets the majority of the blame in my book). He has to find a way to get Ororo to trust him again while allowing her to heal and deal with the all thats happened on her own terms; it's just a big mess :/ But you've pieced together a compelling story so far, I have no doubt you'll get everything on its right path by the end of your story. And I am looking forward to it :)

Author's Response: elise, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and write such an insightful review. Glad you found the realm and that you are using your writing talent here. Please keep writing and I hope you will continue to read and review. Hope this story continues to entertain you and draw out all of the emotions I try to express. Just don't hate me for that. :) AngelAloft

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