[Report This]Date: 10-20-13 - 03:54 pm Title: A Stubborn Heart
Ohhh, someone's scheming!
Author's Response: All I can say is , hahahahahahahaha. A A
Date: 03-21-12 - 07:55 pm Title: A Stubborn Heart
Holy cow!!!! I love this chapter but I just wanted to shake Ororo and Logan and tell them for the love of god (goddess) swallow your damn pride! Did they both have valid points, yes they sure did. Logan was manipulated by Jean and that was wrong but Ororo made a good point by saying that some part of him must have wanted it otherwise it wouldn't have happened. When I read this all I kept think was here are two people that never once had to bend or beg from anyone. All thier life lessons taught them to always be strong and never back down when you know you are in the right. I don't think anyone not even the professor has shown either one when or how to bend. And you would think that Ororo being mistress of the winds would know that sometimes you got bend with the breeze or snap. I want to see these two together but I wanna see Logan be the one to bend first. It's his mess like Scott said. He need to clean it up. And if ya want something bad enough bub, sometimes you gotta go all in and damn the consequences.
Not sure of that was a good Logan impression but it felt good to say. Lol!
Keep up the great work and can't wait for more from you.
Author's Response: D652, I don't think any of you readers who faithfully review have any idea how you inspire us to keep doing what we try to do! THANK YOU. Humbly said. No need to touch on anything you said, it was more than well put, but I will say I think that was one helluva Logan impression and I'm glad you got that one out! LOL A A
Date: 03-21-12 - 02:41 pm Title: A Stubborn Heart
Yay, you're back! I've missed ya!
Sorry for the late review, but since this site rarely updates I just check once in a while. I glad I did. I've missed a lot I see.
I knew it! I knew Jean did some sort of Jedi mind trick on Logan. At least she apologized. (I still want to scratch her eyes out. :o) ) Great updates. I like how you don't have eveyone forgiving her right away. I hope Scott never forgives her. (don't worry Scott, I'm sure Emma or Betsy will give you a shoulder to cry on.)
I really thought Jean and Ororo's scene was very well done. It was a realistic outcome. After Jean's breakdown, I was sure 'Ro was going to forgive her. Even though eventually I know she will, I'm glad she let her know it's going to take some time to get to that point. I really hope Jean get her act together. She's not my favorite, but I do like her relationship with Ororo.
I'm a big Cyclops fan and I love his brotherly affection for our girl. Glad he gave Logan a piece of his mind. but i'm more glad he recognizes that Logan is perfect for her.
For Logan: I understand your anger and reluctance, but get it together, okay?
I can't wait got more.
'Til next time,
shejams
Author's Response: SHEJAMS, you've got to stop making me wonder what has happened to you!!! I'm back and writing and sooo loving it. Check back more often and I hope to not disappoint you. : ) Will be putting up more of 'Rage' after B T, is updated. Keep it coming with the word from you and I will try to keep it coming. As always feel free to tell me like it is. A A
[Report This]Date: 03-18-12 - 12:13 pm Title: A Stubborn Heart
OK I know that they are BOTH stubborn and prideful, and Logan did apologize, but I hope he realizes that even though he was under Jean's influence he has broken Ororo's trust. Apologizing once and saying "I love you" once isn't enough. He needs to prove to her that he loves her and that she is the only one he wants. Leaving isn't going to prove that to her.
Author's Response: QTFic, I'm letting you write my next chapter. : ) Your review is a quick synopsis of what needs to come next to wrap all this up. Seriously, I would like to read what you put down on paper. Thank you for reviewing faithfully and reading with such insight into this fic. . A A
Date: 03-18-12 - 04:00 am Title: A Stubborn Heart
Ahh, intense. Lots of extreme emotions here. I like that you point out Ororo's pride. I find that plenty of writers paint her out to be the victim in a Scott/Jean/Logan/Ororo love polygon, but her pride makes her just as guilty as the rest of them. If that makes any sense at all. xD
In any case, can't wait to see this continue. Is a resolution close at hand? I was hoping that the boathouse they worked so hard to restore would be truly theirs by the end. Let's see if I'm right :o
Author's Response: Hey Marbles, I think you make plenty of sense. : ) With this fic I want to show the confusion the two of them have with relationships due to the fact that they are both stunted emotionally. Will be posting more of this right after Blind Trans. upadate. We are really close to the end. Please stick with me to see how it all ends and I hope you will be satisfied. Oh yeah would like to read some more from you soon, hint, hint. ; )
Thanks for the feedback. A A
[Report This]Date: 03-18-12 - 02:20 am Title: A Stubborn Heart
Wow you are just an fantastic writer of storm/wolverine there is just so many emotions in this story i love it!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Victoria, If I have said it before I'll say it again, you are just too kind and good for one's ego. Thank you for such glowing praise, I just wish to be worthy of it. I try, often falling short of where I want to be, but I do so appreciate you reading and letting me know what you think. As always, thank you so very much. A A
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