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Reviewer: Antiwa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-17-12 - 04:46 am Title: A Heart Stopped

I just want to say that I did not see the end coming out the way it did. I was shocked to her that Jean of all people will be living in the boat house. I wonder what the professor is up to and hope that it goes in his favor. I cant wait for the conversation between the four individuals who are in the living room. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I keep reading and reading the next chapter I have and I just don't feel it's right. I want to get it up though, truly I do. Glad I gave you a little surprise at the end, hope you didn't hate me though. (smile) As always I thank you for taking the time to leave a review after reading. A A

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-14-12 - 01:20 pm Title: A Heart Stopped

Oh no this heffer didn't...she just comes sauntering in like she owns the place?? Oh wait she does because Charles gave it to her!! WTF Chuck? Logan and Ororo put their blood, sweat and tears and you give to the cheating hussy??

I love you 'Ro but you gotta let go of some of this pride. I understand where she's coming from, Logan is strong-willed and even with Jean's influence he may have been able to resist and it's leaving her unsure but Logan is really hurting here and I think he would do anything to get her back if she would just let him in.

Great, great job...please don't stay away that long again! :oD

Author's Response: QTFic, QTFic....., Thank you so much for your generosity in reading and reviewing. I enjoy reading you critiques as much as writing the fics. I am still waiting on your own stories, with such moving and concise reviews you definitely have a gift I think worthy of sharing. All that said, I am so trying to end up my fics so that I can post new ones. I hate having open stories posted without completing what is already there. Check soon and I hope to have more. A A

Reviewer: angel24buffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-12-12 - 04:48 pm Title: A Heart Stopped

All I can say is wow. Jean is so cruel to Ororo. She already has Scott. Stop messing with Logan....I didn't see the ending coming. It was great. Can't wait to read the next chapters.

Author's Response: Angel24buffy, I am enjoying reading your reviews. Thank you for your response to this little story. And I am happy to see that I gave you a bit of a surprise, even though not too pleasant, sorry. Will post more very very soon. A A

Reviewer: RedVixen7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09-12-12 - 04:23 am Title: A Heart Stopped

WHAT?!??????!!!?! Are you serious! That b*tch weasels her way into their relationship and now their house! My.God! Will this madness end?!?!

(Emotions done) inspired chapter! I wish Ro would stop being so stubburn! If this was a normal case of a cheating douche I would be all for it, but it's not. I really hope Lo doesn't leave! That would be a horrible mistake.

Can't wait for the next chappy!!!

Author's Response: RedVixen7, I wish you could see my face right now.....a huge grin is plastered on it. lol It makes me so happy to see you have invested your time and thought into this fic. Don't give up hope with our couple in this, the end is near and I hope you will approve. Thanks always for R & R. More very soon, A A

Reviewer: dispatcher652 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-12-12 - 12:09 am Title: A Heart Stopped

Omg! He gave Jean the house! I'm so shocked I have to say it again. He gave Jean the house! Talk about a heart being stopped. I was ok right up until that sentence. Knowing Xavier there has got to be an alterior motive behind this but holy cow! There might not be a house after this little shake up. Lol!
I hope Jean is not playing Charles like she did Logan.
I just really want Logan and Ororo to swallow their pride and just give in to thier love. When Logan had Mofo bring the bag of new thongs for Ororo I chuckled and did my girlie aww cause it was sweet.
Your writing is just so amazing. This was really well worth the wait. I saw that you had an emergency and I hope that everything is ok. Update when you can and take care. :)

Author's Response: Dispatcher652, First let me say thank you for caring and all is well now, I do appreciate your thoughtfulness and more updates should be coming very soon. Now I know, I know that witch has the house. lol I am liking your idea of there being no house left after that. (smile) hmmm, idea bubble. Yes Logan and Ororo are two very stubborn and prideful people in this one, why don't they just suck it up. lol We are nearing the end so I have a lot of clean up work to do from prior chapters, Peter and Logan and Logan giving Storm the thongs. Glad you approved, and that it made you happy. You never fail to keep me motivated, thank you so much. Until next......A A

Reviewer: Britt1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09-11-12 - 08:25 pm Title: A Heart Stopped

What The Hell! Oh you have got to update very soon, I need my RoLo to get back together.

Author's Response: Britt1990, good to know you are still with me. I don't want to be so long between postings again. Check soon and thank you for leaving a review and reading. You guys make me smile. A A

Reviewer: shejams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09-11-12 - 07:46 pm Title: A Heart Stopped

What the heck?
First Jean took her man...now she's taking het house?
Oh, heck no! Lol
Mojo is one smart dog. I'm glad he left. I don't want him to get injured when the fireworks starts.
Welcome back and great update. If you can't tell, I'm enjoying this very much.
I especially liked the kids' scene. It just made me smile. I think it's really endearing when kids act like kids.
On another note: Logan and Ororo should just let go their pride and get back together. (another giggle moment was his gift to her. Hehe)

Anyway, looking forward to more. :D

Author's Response: Thank you Shejams for making this 9/11 better. Hopefully more is on the way soon. I do so love your reviews and input. (smiling) Again thank you. A A

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