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Reviewer: disaptcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-12 - 06:04 am Title: Heart to Heart

Yesssss! You're back. :) And I'm so psyched. I was about to go to bed when I took a chance to see if there was and update and there it was.
What an update it was. I didn't know what to do.
At first you feel sorry for Ororo and Scott and want them to be emotional distance from both Logan and Jean. Kinda of a stop the world I wanna get off type thing. Then you cheer Scott on for wanting to try and move on from the pain they both have. And just when you start to agree, Ororo changes your mind and just like Scott and all you want to do protect her from anything that could hurt her.
Where I really got conflicted is with Logan. You want to be angry with him but at the same time you want him to be with Ororo. The kiss was awesome because it let them both know the door is not as closed as they thought. But if I were Logan, I'd set aside my pride and beg that women for forgiveness.
I can't wait to read when these two finally face each other and make it. Man,that's gonna be good. :)

Author's Response: Dispatcher 652, You have no idea how I look forward to your reviews. You read sooo much more than I write, you are very insightful. You put in your reviews what my writing lacks in explanation. Thank you so much for your feedback, it's very inspiring.

Reviewer: Duchess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-02-11 - 05:55 am Title: Heart to Heart

That's it!!???!! You have to update! Please!! I need to know how it ends! Do my RoLo get back together??? Oh, please let them!! ;_;

Author's Response: Duchess, I apologize for the long wait in updating, but I am back and will be posting as much as possible. Hopefully you will be pleased with the outcome. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Felicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07-07-11 - 09:30 pm Title: Heart to Heart

brilliant freaking bloody brilliant

Author's Response: Thank you Felicia. I hope this is entertaining to you in at least the smallest of ways. Means alot that you take the time to read and review.

Reviewer: soapyharlequin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-25-11 - 03:33 pm Title: To hurt a heart

lol at Ororo..she's got spunk. The ending was super...i miss mofo though, lol That darn Jean always ruining things for people. gosh!

Author's Response: I don't have to say a thing, you said it all. I quite concur.

Reviewer: SH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-24-11 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE the name of the dog, freaking classic! l, also, really like the idea of Logan having a dog. It makes sense, i'm soooo going to steal that idea from you. And my dog will be bigger LOL

Just one problem, which is probably why I never could read past the first paragraph. Things in caps just make me cringe, lol. Stupid, i know. It's probably too late now but...thought I'd point it out to you that i think it's better to write "she yelled" versus actually cap..

Author's Response: SH, you are loco. :) Steal away, steal away, with your writing I'm sure your dog will be great. Sorry to see my using caps bothered you...,but I love to. It's my lazy way to emphasize something without writing the extra words, but I'm glad to see you were able to read beyond it anyway. I appreciate you taking time to read and review. Input is always helpful and I love it. Thanx AA

Reviewer: Lis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-11 - 03:39 am Title: Heart to Heart

very interesting :) The Scott/Oro thing was definitely unexpected. I do love the way you have Logan and Jean confront each other at the bar. Makes me wonder though just how much she is messing with his head trying to get him back.

Author's Response: Hello Lis, I'm trying not to be too predictable, so I'm glad you were a little surprised. Seems like I just keep making Jean more and more deplorable in this story, without truly meaning to be that harsh...oh well she gets what she gets, it's only a story. :) Talk to ya soon...AngelAloft

Reviewer: sasse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-22-11 - 03:27 am Title: Heart to Heart

This is great. I'm still trying to figure out how you will get them back together (scratching my head) I mean he slept with Jean......

I'm loving Scott & Ororo's relationship it is so sweet. Makes me want to hug them both. UPDATE SOON

Author's Response: Hi sasse, Glad you like this. I know he said he slept with Jean, but in my mind the heifer did all she could do short of assaulting him. And he definitely had no love in any of it. Can't give a clue away to Jean in this one. I enjoy writing the X-men as close to family as I can especially sibling relationships. Thank you for your response. AngelAloft

Reviewer: Dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-11 - 01:10 am Title: Heart to Heart

Yay! An update. I was really glad that Logan didnt fall for Jean's tears or her trying to get Logan to see there was something between them. Whe he said was always in live with Ororo I was like that was huge.
Scott and Ororo'a conversation was also nice. Even through all her hurt and pain she defended Logan. She could have joined in on Scott's bender but she didnt. She remained a lady and true to her heart.

Author's Response: Dispatcher 652, First of all love that you caught the update, just hope I never get you in trouble at work. ;) I see Logan as a lot more savvy than he is given credit for and want to depict him as such. And of course, I can't help but have Ororo see beyond all the faults each character has. She is and always will be a class act to me. Thank you for getting it. AngelAloft P.S. Thank you for being diligent enough to still read and review.

Reviewer: QTFic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-22-11 - 12:30 am Title: Heart to Heart

Wow! Ororo's beautiful heart shines through even in all of this.

I can't believe Jean is still going after Logan, is she delusional???

I am really wanting to see how they are all going to live and work together after all of this.

I am not going to beg you to update soon, I will wait patiently.....are you ready to update yet?

Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha, QTFic, QTFic...thank you for making me smile. To answer your last question, yes I am ready to update very soon. :) You are so faithful to review and it is appreciated. I have a surprise in the works for all of you who have read and reviewed consistently. Hope you will like it. Until next time, I hope I'm not stressing you out with this crazy fic. :) AngelAloft

Reviewer: DanielleduLys Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-11 - 11:35 pm Title: Heart to Heart

It's really childish of me (and not like Ororo at all) but I want Ro and Scott to have a night of drunken passionate sex just to spite Logan and Jean!!! >:-(

Wonderful chapter as usual AA. Love your writing!

Author's Response: Danielled, I would never think you childish. I want retribution for Ororo and Scott as well and I'm the one writing the story. :) Love reading your feedback and thank you for the compliment. Knowing you are still reading is inspiring. AngelAloft

Reviewer: shejams Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 03:16 pm Title: A Heart Betrayed

OMG! How the heck did I miss all these updates. I missed a whole lot.

Poor Ororo. Poor Scott; and I' m gonna say Poor Logan because I'm pretty sure that Jean did some sort of Jedi mind trick on him. (GRR)
I was absolutely speechless until this last chapter. My head's still spinning. How are you going to resolve this? I hope Scott kick her to the curb and Ororo, at least, punch her lights out. LOL

Anyway, this is more addictive than a soap opera. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Til next time


Author's Response: shejams, you are definitely a writers delight. Thank you for your reviews. I'm enjoying reading them more than I am writing the fic. :) Thank you so much for your encouragement, and for hanging in there with me. AngelAloft

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-04-11 - 01:55 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

To answer your question Angel, no my computer didn't alert me so there were not just one but TWO chapters I hadn't read. So I put it in time out for the rest of the night to learn it's lesson, but I think I'm the one that got punished on that one!!

Author's Response: Damn technology...LMAO!!! Maybe it was just a glitch. But it sounds like you bit it and it Bit back!!! LOL

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-11 - 04:10 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

Angel.....what the...I can't even....there are no words. My heart is about to fall out of my chest!!

Please, please tell me there will be an update soon, you can't leave us hanging here like this!!

Author's Response: LMAO QT, I do enjoy responding to you, you seem to be a kindred soul with the same feelings even as I write them. I promise more is on the way, wouldn't dream of leaving you hanging again. Angel A Oh yeah did your computer communicate with you this time on the update!? once again...LMAO

Reviewer: Britt1990 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-02-11 - 12:42 am Title: A Heart Betrayed

Oh My God, I just want to kick Jeans ass, she is such a bitch and to do that to your loyal friend, I hope you update real soon, nice job writing!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it Britt. Even as I write it, I want to kick her butt. No matter how it turns out you can do it, just close your eyes and imagine yourself or Ororo doing it, hey it's only fiction. :) Thanx for reading, more is on the way. Angel A

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-31-11 - 02:56 pm Title: A Heart Betrayed

My heart broke, but I know you will fix it. I hope it all comes out about how Jean messed with Logan's mind to lessen his attraction to 'Ro and increase his attraction to her. Jean is a mess and doesn't deserve anyone's pity.

Author's Response: Ang, your first sentence spoke volumes to me. Very sweetly put and I don't want to let you down. You say a lot with a few sentences. Message received. Angel A :)

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