I am sorry but I love the aggressive Logan and the aggressive Ro!! I would love to see jean walk into his room to get some and Logan is already with Ro. I hate jean! Can't wait for in update!!

It's impressively written and dark too. I can't wait to read more. I'm dying for it.

I admire your actual skill for writing and I hope you update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next.

Ok, I have a few issues here. 1) You make Logan seem like Sabretooth. And my point is made when Logan asks if she's a screamer.
2) Ya'll is spelled Y'all
3) What the heck is it with people and their cursing? Seriously, it doesn't help with the story by making it more dramatic, it ruins it. If it was only in there maybe in a couple of area's I could handle it. But it's not.

Sorry for being critical, but I needed to get my point across.

Author's Response: No need to be sorry. :) 2) you are so correct but I had NO idea that was how it was spelled. It's funny because today i was in class and my teach said the correct way to spell was 'y'all' and it was all "well color me stupid lol and then you point it out to me today as well. 3) I like cursing lol ^_^ But I don't curse...much....in real life so *shrug* Fuck is such a versatile word. It can be used for anything/everything. You probably won't like/read this then. There will be curse words like I need air..peppered throughout everything. 1) Um...I see that if your thinking of the that line in movie however, I do disagree. In Ultimate (which is where my Logan is mostly based off), he was a bastard when he first joined the team and mean. Very mean. He only liked Jean and that was it. Everyone else was like crap to him soooo. Different strokes for different folks. This was long! And your review was like three seconds! I'm long winded.

Even though Storm was getting herself in the middle of things that aren't her concern, I can understand why she did it....but oh boy look where it got her!! Your Logan is intense and...well let's admit it, sort of a douche but I'm hooked and I can't wait to see how this develops. Great job thus far I can't wait for your next chapter!!

I really like this story. Different premise than I'm used to reading but one chapter in and I'm hooked. I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Logan's accent is a little choppy in bits and pieces. When he's saying "to you," make it "to ya" instead of "ta ya." Just a thought. There's also things like "Ya here for my pleasure now." It'd sound right if it were "Yer here." Go with "yer" where you would usually have "your" and this will be perfect.

In the meantime, I enjoyed this. A few spellings could be beta'd out, but I shivered during their interactions and felt how pissed Ororo was and nodded at her logic for being there. Was she interfering? Sure. She was being a real buttinski, but you could see that she meant the best for Scott, and in her own way, for Jean, too.

Can't blame Logan for getting turned on by a hot purple dress. It'd be nice if he didn't have to be an ass about it, but again, you've made me want the inevitable train wreck that will happen once they sleep together and deal with the consequences. Can you tell I love angst?

More of this story, please. Soon.

It's going to be interesting seeing Logan try to win her heart after his actions, but then again the attraction already there.