WOW, I could really feel the tension here. I guess I was even a little afraid of Logan hurting Ororo - and that's a compliment! Your story is quite original, and I cant' wait for the next chapter!

Wow, okay...this is definitely a view of Logan I have never had before, not saying that as a bad thing...I have always loved the rough, domineering, totally cocky Wolverine. You have a powerful use of words and by this start a dynamite imagination. Will be interesting to see where you take this. You had me laughing at 'either way I'm getting some ass'. Not any typical Rolo I've ever read, (once again not a bad thing) and I'm no expert critique, but you have captured my interest. Very good writing.