Date: 09-26-18 - 01:49 am Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
Please finish this story.
[Report This]Date: 07-07-16 - 05:16 pm Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
PLEASE please continue this story. I LOVE it!
Date: 08-23-15 - 04:08 am Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
Next chapters soon please.
Date: 04-02-15 - 01:09 am Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
Pls continue and update.
Date: 04-23-12 - 06:14 am Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
you're very good with capturing voices and choosing words (I like how distinct storm and logan sound) but I'm not sure if I like how logan is pretty much essentially raping ororo in this. i can't really tell if that's what you want this story to come across as, so i'm sorry if I got the wrong vibe from this.
that's just personal preference though (i can't see how anyone would want to write/read about such a thing, but w/e floats your boat?)
Author's Response: I can see how Logan's treatment of Ororo could be seen as rape. But it's not. Let me give you a bit of background. Their sexual relationship is based off a form of bdsm. Consensual non-consensuality. Which is that one is giving consent to the situation as a whole (which ro did) but they may not necessarily agree/have control to what will happen to them.
[Report This]Date: 10-08-11 - 02:02 am Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
Omg....I need more more and more please do not stop writing this
Date: 10-03-11 - 02:12 pm Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
thanks for updating, i hope Ororo will never lose control, i am not too fond of her behavior here oh well but the story is enjoyable. I can't wait for the next chapter.
PS: you are a fantastic writter but your French is really bad, sorry.
“Puis me parlar (then talk to me)” this is not french, "Alors parle moi" is the true translation of "then talk to me".
Author's Response: Why thank you! *blushes* I do try...blame Google translations lol
[Report This]Date: 10-02-11 - 07:02 pm Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
This chapter was so worth the wait. I'm glad Ororo held back and was able to have some control. I also like when she struck Logan in the greenhouse. It may have only knocked the wind of him but at least she got one good hit in.
As for Logan, I wanna hate for him for what he is doing but I can't. I want him to want Ororo. To see her as his. Not just because it will bug the crap out of Jean but because he needs to see what kinda of she truly is and really want to be with her.
Bad boys. Gott love 'em. :)
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad it was. This was mess and so hard to write.You know, that scene where she hits him was added last minute because I didnt like how 'weak' Ororo was coming off. Go figure, lol. Yeah Jean *shakes head*I'm totally working on that. My plan for next chapter is to start bridging the gap between rolo!
Date: 10-02-11 - 10:42 am Title: Humiliation--Ororo Pt 2
OMG you updated!!!!! Thank you so much, I literally shouted and woke up my whole household when I saw it, no joke rofl. Amazing chapter and of course you got me wanting more, are you trying to be the death of me? Update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL Im very glad this meets your approval...it was a little iffy for me which is why it took sooo very long :)
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