I am truly in awe of your writing talent. Now how in the hell you get them from a totally coerced relationship to a mutually acceptable one (if that's where you are headed), will be one hell of a feat. My hat's off to ya'. And that ending, uummh huuhnn, clearing my throat...not that way, get your mind out of the gutter, no words will do. :)

omg great chapter, was worth the wait. I'm still hoping Ro gets Logan back at his own game. Maybe some hardcore jealousy? *sigh* Nothing better then a jealous Logan lol. But.......August!?!?!?!?!?! *cries*

Absolutly loved it just hate that it cant be updated every week whoo what an cruel cruel cliff hanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: yay i'm glad you loved it Vic! This was my fav chapter by far. Logan was sooo yummy and nasty! a guy after my own heart *swoons*

Update! Yeeeesssssss!!!


Please don't make us wait so long again! :3

Author's Response: lol does that mean you liked it? lol I cant promise part 2 will come out any quicker. I'm still trying to see where i want to take this.

Ok, I have a few issues here. 1) You make Logan seem like Sabretooth. And my point is made when Logan asks if she's a screamer.
2) Ya'll is spelled Y'all
3) What the heck is it with people and their cursing? Seriously, it doesn't help with the story by making it more dramatic, it ruins it. If it was only in there maybe in a couple of area's I could handle it. But it's not.

Sorry for being critical, but I needed to get my point across.

Author's Response: No need to be sorry. :) 2) you are so correct but I had NO idea that was how it was spelled. It's funny because today i was in class and my teach said the correct way to spell was 'y'all' and it was all "well color me stupid lol and then you point it out to me today as well. 3) I like cursing lol ^_^ But I don't curse...much....in real life so *shrug* Fuck is such a versatile word. It can be used for anything/everything. You probably won't like/read this then. There will be curse words like I need air..peppered throughout everything. 1) Um...I see that if your thinking of the that line in movie however, I do disagree. In Ultimate (which is where my Logan is mostly based off), he was a bastard when he first joined the team and mean. Very mean. He only liked Jean and that was it. Everyone else was like crap to him soooo. Different strokes for different folks. This was long! And your review was like three seconds! I'm long winded.

Nicely written chapter. The first scene with Ororo and Scott perfectly explained why Ororo would ever have approached Logan in the first place.
I love Logan's reaction to Beast. And a part of me wants to smack Jean and Scott.
Can't wait for more RoLo. This story has become my addiction. Please update soon.

Author's Response: thank you! Mmmm, I was hoping that you (used in the general sense) would be sympathetic to Jott...no? I really want to flesh them out and make their issues 'real' instead of just one note like they tend to be in rolo fics.

This was a great chapter. I can't wait for Chapter 3.

Oooh Logan you do have some nerve. Too bad the last paragraphs couldn't be loaded here, I read them on ff.net and they had me rolling!

Even though there wasn't much RoLo I think this was an essential chapter. It showed Storms real motivation for first seeking Logan out and it also gave us a glimpse into everyone's personalities and the defining relationships of each of the characters.

Great update, I hope to get to read more of this story soon.