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Reviewer: victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-11 - 07:00 am Title: Conditions

Omg i forgot to put my name on my comment with me ranting about jean having no self control but any whoo an extra review to say how much i love this story!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-11 - 06:57 am Title: Conditions

All i can say is damn this chapter was spectacular, damn scott needs to grow a pair of steel ones and stop letting jean lead him around on a leash beecause she is a straight chicken head i mean damn i thought she was going to throw herself on logan right in the kitchen no self control at all......Whoo i love this story!!!!!!!

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-11 - 12:06 am Title: Indecent Proposal

Even though Storm was getting herself in the middle of things that aren't her concern, I can understand why she did it....but oh boy look where it got her!! Your Logan is intense and...well let's admit it, sort of a douche but I'm hooked and I can't wait to see how this develops. Great job thus far I can't wait for your next chapter!!

Reviewer: Caitlin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-06-11 - 06:24 am Title: Indecent Proposal

It was horribly good. Like the 5 dollar paperback romances tucked away in the back of a bookshop. I can't help reading it over. I want to see what happens next! although no lady should ever find themselves in that predicament.

Reviewer: sweetgirl83 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-06-11 - 05:14 am Title: Indecent Proposal

I really like this story. Different premise than I'm used to reading but one chapter in and I'm hooked. I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-11 - 12:05 am Title: Indecent Proposal

WHOA!! I didn't think I was gonna enjoy this from reading the summary, but I did (I'm genuinely surprised). You have a talent for putting pen to paper. Please keep going, I'm anxious to see how it goes.

Oh and I have to interject my own opinions for a moment...Plz don't let anyone influence your style and how you choose to write your stories, I have said it here many, many times it's your story write it how 'you' want it...;) There's my 2 cent now take it or give it to a charity...lol

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-01-11 - 06:46 am Title: Indecent Proposal

Logan's accent is a little choppy in bits and pieces. When he's saying "to you," make it "to ya" instead of "ta ya." Just a thought. There's also things like "Ya here for my pleasure now." It'd sound right if it were "Yer here." Go with "yer" where you would usually have "your" and this will be perfect.

In the meantime, I enjoyed this. A few spellings could be beta'd out, but I shivered during their interactions and felt how pissed Ororo was and nodded at her logic for being there. Was she interfering? Sure. She was being a real buttinski, but you could see that she meant the best for Scott, and in her own way, for Jean, too.

Can't blame Logan for getting turned on by a hot purple dress. It'd be nice if he didn't have to be an ass about it, but again, you've made me want the inevitable train wreck that will happen once they sleep together and deal with the consequences. Can you tell I love angst?

More of this story, please. Soon.

Reviewer: victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-31-10 - 06:53 am Title: Indecent Proposal

oh my fruicking gosh i am completly sold on this mofo story please please please keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ang Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-31-10 - 02:18 am Title: Indecent Proposal

It's going to be interesting seeing Logan try to win her heart after his actions, but then again the attraction already there.

Reviewer: DanielleduLys Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-31-10 - 12:47 am Title: Indecent Proposal

WOW, I could really feel the tension here. I guess I was even a little afraid of Logan hurting Ororo - and that's a compliment! Your story is quite original, and I cant' wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: BaDGirL Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-10 - 07:24 am Title: Indecent Proposal

I like it. Can't wait to read more, I'm excited to see where you take this. Hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: AngelAloft Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-10 - 06:32 am Title: Indecent Proposal

Wow, okay...this is definitely a view of Logan I have never had before, not saying that as a bad thing...I have always loved the rough, domineering, totally cocky Wolverine. You have a powerful use of words and by this start a dynamite imagination. Will be interesting to see where you take this. You had me laughing at 'either way I'm getting some ass'. Not any typical Rolo I've ever read, (once again not a bad thing) and I'm no expert critique, but you have captured my interest. Very good writing.

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