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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-17-19 - 03:09 pm Title: To Forget

Next chapter please !

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-19-16 - 01:45 am Title: Overpowering

Next chapter,please.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03-20-15 - 09:19 am Title: To Forget

I was loving this story and then you left it with me wanting more. Please update and continue.

Reviewer: dudtheman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-15-12 - 06:39 pm Title: To Forget

awsome i hope to read more =)

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-10-12 - 04:14 pm Title: To Forget

Can't believe you left this here. I'm dying to know what happens next. Dang, you really have a fantastic story going here. Please update.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-10 - 04:01 am Title: To Forget

I Loved It, please keep writing more!!!

Reviewer: s l smith Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-20-10 - 06:28 pm Title: To Forget

i luv badass ororo!!! i like where this is going, whats the new power? hoping you will update soon

Reviewer: sacred Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-24-09 - 11:30 pm Title: You Win

That was so worth the wait! One thing though: Logan wouldn't be able to see Ororo blush.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying my story. :-) And you are right, I guess he wouldn't be able to see much of a blush, I'm just gonna chalk it up to his super human senses lol, or the fact that this author was on a roll and wrote what felt right :-) I think Ororo would be an irresistible sight if she were blushing.

Reviewer: sacred Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-24-09 - 10:58 pm Title: Possibilites

Oh my God! When Logan told Jean to read his mind until he told her to stop, I was like, "Oh no, you didn't!" I would have loved it if all he thought of was doing the nasty with Ororo.

Reviewer: sacred Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-24-09 - 10:41 pm Title: Boundaries

This chapter was so hot! I loved Logan watching Ro, hop on his bike. I also love all the innuendos!

Reviewer: Zunat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-18-09 - 03:23 am Title: To Forget

Can't wait for another update!!! Please, pretty please.

Reviewer: DaughteroftheWind Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-15-09 - 10:58 pm Title: To Forget

I am really enjoying this story. Update faster! Thanks for the heart you show between the two of them. :)

Author's Response: No worries I am typing up the next chapter now, watch for it in the next few days. Thanks for the review I'm glad you're enjoying it :-)

Reviewer: GhostAuthor Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-14-09 - 09:59 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm

i always knew Ororo was strong. Jean had better watch her back.



Author's Response: I always considered Ororo to be one of the strongest characters and it always bugged the heck out of me that Jean led Logan and Scott on like she did. So there will definitely be more conflict between Ororo and Jean because I think Jean has it coming :-) Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-07-09 - 03:01 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm

THANK GOD!!! Love love love this chapter. Crazy Jean needed that reality check in public to make things clearer to her. And BRAVO for a more powerful Storm! We never seem to read of a powerful Storm unless she is somehow wanted as some crazy guy's queen, or possessed by the Shadow King. Womp womp! As I've stated earlier. Loves it! lol! :) I can't wait for the next chapter.

Also, thanks for making these chapters just the right length while still creating a good rhythm in the storyline.

Author's Response: Thanx so much for the review I appreciate it sooo much. Hope the next few chaps. are gonna be to your liking as well. :-)

Reviewer: frekiashika Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-06-09 - 11:51 am Title: Calm Before the Storm

Seems something interesting is gonna happen. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing it means a lot :-) Yah interesting things are gonna happen for sure ;-)

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