Date: 12-19-16 - 01:45 am Title: Overpowering
Next chapter,please.
Date: 07-13-08 - 04:24 am Title: Overpowering
nice intro. simple and great detail. a new view of storm but you make her sound more like a cool girl who can take care of herself.
Date: 08-13-06 - 02:17 pm Title: Overpowering
Wonderful. Great work. I'm smiling as I picture Logan sitting there, totally drained and still wanting her. Their reactions to the experience seemed very genuine. I enjoyed this, and I am happy someone actually updated today.
Date: 06-29-05 - 06:29 am Title: Overpowering
I love the opening chapter and ororo is the badass and logon is new
Date: 06-01-04 - 04:34 am Title: Overpowering
Excellent. I loved the characterization in this first chapter, especially the description of Ororo, and you're not too far off on their ultimate attitudes. Ororo is very sassy, and the girl knows she's fine. Logan is lustful and has his own arrogance. Great introduction to the characters and their obvious attraction.
Date: 04-21-04 - 02:38 am Title: Overpowering
Hey, even though you have never read Ultimate X-men, I think you nailed it with this story. It is really good, it's already got me begging for more, and it's only the first chapter!!! :-) I really hope you decide to continue with this story...I know I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Date: 02-29-04 - 06:45 am Title: Overpowering
Looking good, now where is the rest? XLF
Date: 01-19-04 - 01:50 am Title: Overpowering
I can tell this is gonna be a good one. Update soon please.
Date: 09-01-03 - 02:08 am Title: Overpowering
You've got a pretty good premise going.
Date: 08-03-03 - 04:00 am Title: Overpowering
Me-ow! 'Roro's sure got some 'tude in this fic! I'm looking forward to more. -Vix
Date: 07-29-03 - 04:00 am Title: Overpowering
Good stuff, I like when people write a different side of Storm. Please continue.
Date: 08-01-03 - 04:00 am Title: Overpowering
wow.....that was great....the attraction between ro and logan is so tangiblethat i could almost feel it!..........can't wait for next chapter