[Report This]Date: 06-02-04 - 08:29 pm Title: Boundaries
HOT! damn girl you've got it down like a technique! amazing! please continue!
[Report This]Date: 06-02-04 - 12:07 pm Title: Boundaries
I am picking up the tiara from the shop later today so I can properly crown you as the queen of sexual tension and heat inducing inneudo. My goodness! Four chapters was indeed worth the wait for this scene. This sexually aggressive Ororo is very mesmerizing. Logan's reaction to her not-so-subtle advances was extremely natural and not out of character for him. MMM... very good. MMMMMM....
[Report This]Date: 06-02-04 - 01:02 am Title: Boundaries
That was HOTTTT!!!! You could feel the heat coming off those two. I loved when Ororo hopped on his bike, that was sexy! You must update this A.S.A.P.!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06-01-04 - 04:34 am Title: Overpowering
Excellent. I loved the characterization in this first chapter, especially the description of Ororo, and you're not too far off on their ultimate attitudes. Ororo is very sassy, and the girl knows she's fine. Logan is lustful and has his own arrogance. Great introduction to the characters and their obvious attraction.
[Report This]Date: 05-29-04 - 02:34 pm Title: Obsession
WOWOWOW!!!!! lol very intense.... i love to see this 'bad to the bone' side of storm yet this weakness as well..... very captivating..... CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05-29-04 - 02:34 pm Title: Obsession
WOWOWOW!!!!! lol very intense.... i love to see this 'bad to the bone' side of storm yet this weakness as well..... very captivating..... CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05-28-04 - 01:01 am Title: Obsession
It's good to see Ororo's bad side. I would love to see this continue. I can't wait to see how Ororo goes after Logan especially when they are so much alike. I've always wanted to see what it would be like to see Ororo and Jean go at each other's throat. Ororo is really agressive in a watch out in your face kind of way. I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 05-26-04 - 04:49 am Title: Obsession
Hmmm. Storm sounded like Logan in this chapter. Growling and having trouble controlling her rage. Must I even say it...I don't think so, but I will anyway...I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Please don't keep us waiting too long for an update. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05-26-04 - 04:33 am Title: Defiance
Oooooo. Nice chapter. I was wondering where this story went, happy to see your hanging in there, this story is definately worth it. And I would like to thank you for that wonderful moment of Jean being put in her place by our lovely 'Ro. Man...ya gotta love that fanfiction :-D
[Report This]Date: 05-26-04 - 02:38 am Title: Obsession
Ohhh...I love it!...the plot is soooo good...I cant wait for more...(seriously)...im on the edge of my seat
[Report This]Date: 04-21-04 - 02:38 am Title: Overpowering
Hey, even though you have never read Ultimate X-men, I think you nailed it with this story. It is really good, it's already got me begging for more, and it's only the first chapter!!! :-) I really hope you decide to continue with this story...I know I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02-29-04 - 06:45 am Title: Overpowering
Looking good, now where is the rest? XLF
[Report This]Date: 01-19-04 - 01:50 am Title: Overpowering
I can tell this is gonna be a good one. Update soon please.
[Report This]Date: 09-01-03 - 02:08 am Title: Overpowering
You've got a pretty good premise going.
[Report This]Date: 08-03-03 - 04:00 am Title: Overpowering
Me-ow! 'Roro's sure got some 'tude in this fic! I'm looking forward to more. -Vix
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