[Report This]Date: 05-07-06 - 02:30 am Title: Two
Man. It's not often I use the words "painful" and "beautiful" in the same sentence, but here it fits. It hurts so much to see two people who love each other fall apart, but the way you flesh out the circumstances, you know its inevitable, it has to happen. Ororo finding the blood in the laundry gave me chills. Excellent, excellent work.
[Report This]Date: 04-05-04 - 06:39 pm Title: Two
Oh ma gawd!!! this story just gets more and more beautiful. it's really touching and well-written. looks like you've put your heart into it. reading this gives you a feeling of never "putting it down". yours is one of those few that are really just... amazing! can't wait for your updates!! ü
Author's Response: Thank you so much., Blue! Like the great Will Ferrell said in 'Old School': "You're my boy, Blue!" I'm glad it is being received so fondly. All my efforts are going into finishing this piece soon. I hope I can get your thoughts once completed. (Wide Grin)
[Report This]Date: 04-03-04 - 09:00 pm Title: Two
Perfect... Just like yhe first chapter. It is also sad. They seem to still have this painful longing for eachother, and it hurts to see two lovers feeling that way. You just wish that they could have always been happy from start to end, so it kind of hurts to read. But perfect as always, in it's bittersweet way.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tough, for your feelings. It does hurt to read the details of the disintergration of a relationship, as it was to write it. That's why it took so long. Just certain places you just don't want to go. I'm glad you liked the story. I hug you!
[Report This]Date: 04-03-04 - 08:07 pm Title: Two
Another stunning addition to the story. Written with a startling grace and beautifully crafted as ever.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your regard for my piece. A glowing review from the person behind the riveting works "Hard Day's Night " & "Darkness Falls" is very much cherished indeed!
[Report This]Date: 04-03-04 - 10:11 am Title: Two
I burst into tears more than once while reading this story, if that tells you anything. This story is just so wonderfully written. The language that you use captures the reader from the beginning. I have honestly never read anything quite like this...it is a story, but is also poetry. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment of this wonderful work!!!
Author's Response: (Nem is reminded of that last scene in "You've Got Mail") Don't cry. Don't cry, JamesGirl. :) JG, this is such a fabulous review. Thank you! I am glad you enjoy it. Your words are far too... You made my day!
[Report This]Date: 04-03-04 - 06:59 am Title: Two
Wow ... it's not often when a fic completely captures my attention as this one has! What strikes me most is the insight into the souls of these characters, and delving so deeply into both what makes this relationship so perfect and so complicated ... keep up the fantastic work! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Minarya, during my lurking phase, before I got the gumption up to actually write a story, you were on my tagged favorites list. Your characterizations in "Silver Lining" was utterly beautiful. Thank you so much for your regard for this story. I hope to someday be consistently on or near your level.
[Report This]Date: 04-03-04 - 05:32 am Title: Two
After reading the 2nd chapter, this story just gets better and better.. I especially loved how it made me stop and think about the people involved in the story and really address the identities of everyone. Not many stories make you such an active partcipater. Please post the next chapter soon!!
Author's Response: Lerie! Thank you so much! You are such a great reviewer. In regards to the identities of everyone... I hope they weren't too confusing. I'm glad you feel a sense of participation! I feel you are perceiving something no one else is... hmmm. I am really shooting to update soon. The bad mojo from the disintergration of the beautful lurve kept me very wary. Let's see if I can bite the bullet and make this happen!
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