Ok, I'm going to say this first. Echo, I've been reading quite a few of your stories. I've been enjoying them a lot and I think you have a lot of talent as a writer.

But I have to say this for the love of god, please stop using w/ and & in place of the actual words. It is nothing worst for me when i'm sitting enjoying a chapter but then i cringe when i see w/ in a sentence.

w/ is not a word. Its a short-hand statement that's in messages and texting. It has no place in any body of work.

Also & should only be used with placing two names together making them a pair or a couple. Such as Batman & Robin. Or Cloak & Dagger. It does not replace and in a sentence because because once again its not an actual word.

So Ro and Scooter... He wants her back, so much is for sure. I hope she sticks to her plan to move on...
Really liked the electric shock that passed between Ro and Logan at the mall! :)
But now he thinks she's with Scooter... that I don't like, heh. I hope they'll meet again. Soon. To clear that up.
Hm, I'm sure he knows her... Did he meet her as a kid maybe? There must be a reason why she cannot remember him.
I hope to find out soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, a little geometry going on here alright... Ro may be *planning* on moving on, but don't think it's going to be that easy for her (especially if Scooter has anything to say on the matter!)... And yeah, they're meeting up VERY soon--next chapter soon enough for ya?

Oooooooh. I can't wait for them to get some interaction! More soon i hope. This is a very good story.

Author's Response: Ask & ye shall recieve--next Chap!