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Reviewer: stormlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12-11-13 - 11:29 am Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Okay....that was just plain stupid. Didn't they know the man was going to lose it? They set him up.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-27-07 - 09:00 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

that was so sweet what T’Challa said. Its a good thing she has someone there to hold her hand, so to speak.

damn. That was intense. He killed or at the very least wounded them. That what's they getting for fucking with the Wolverine.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 05:59 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Great chapter!!!! I have to know what happens to Logan and Storm. Is Storm preganat becasue She and Logan sleep together alot and with no potection I would gather that she would be. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 03:15 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 07:04 am Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Wow there is a lot going on. I wonder if now that she knows a bit more about her past she can pull together her fractured life also knowing that her brother doesn't hate her. Speaking of fractured life...dang that DR exercise blew up in their faces. I wonder what it will mean for Logan and the mission. And what is the deal in Genosha. Hmm....

Reviewer: irish_sunset Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 06:55 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

WTF! Is going on?

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 03:40 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Aha! The chapter is fixed! Well it's absolutely awsome. I loved the cute little scene between Ororo and her brother. The Logan part is down right disturbing though. Why would the play such mind-fucking games with him? Okay more soon, please!!!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 01:11 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

That's it. I'm never writing again. I always feel like an amateur after reading one of your updates. There was a deep commitment to the story, fantastic dialogue, and such a feeling of tension running throughout that it was very tangible. Good work.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 02:35 am Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Oh no! Poor Logan... Why did that bastard do that to him? Did he kill every member of his team? Man, I have a feeling he'll be filled with even more self-loathing. Thumbs up on making Ororo and T'Challa siblings instead of *gag* love interests.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-07 - 10:50 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

*Breathing a huge sigh of relief* I can live with this. It's curious as it echo's, and no pun intended, your Desert Rose story. I have to mention this because it threw me for a few seconds, you have T'Challa saying "I am the first born son of T’Challa . . .” Of course I read on and saw what you meant but thought you should know.

Well! This is really going in an entirely different direction than expected. Powerful ending. And btw, I don't mind the lull between updates, gives me time to keep up being as busy as I am but now you must update ASAP! ;D


Author's Response: Oop...! Looks like I wasn't any more awake the 2nd time around than the 1st. sheesh, i really do need to stop writing & posting in the middle of the night...lol Thanks for letting me know; I've fixed it (I know, I know, really anal, but I can't help it!) And thanks for the review, too! ;)

Reviewer: tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-07 - 10:33 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

-.- update faster >.< , great chptr btw =D

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