This story has been very interesting. I loved how love grew between Ororo and Logan. And it was interesting seeing Jean as a sympathetic figure. What happened to Charles and where do Ororo and Logan go now. What does the military have planned for Logan now.?

Will you be working on this story any more? I sure hope so.

that was...poweful.

Wow...wonderful! It made me cry....Beautifully written, and very vivid. I have just one request, stop using "w/" instead of with, the whole thing just takes you back to reality abruptly. Still one of the best fanfics i've ever read. Please update soon! And soon means soon! Or i'll hunt you down! ;)

Well, that turned me into an emotional wreck. You did an excellent job at conveying Logan's grief. That was painfully beautiful. And Charles. I'm guessing he passed away. That's really sad. Because he and Ororo weren't able to have their proper reunion before TLV got the best of him.

I felt horribly for everyone in this chapter. Please update as soon as you can. This is one of my favorites!

So that's why little Amahra died. No wonder Logan blamed himself. That's so sad.
I was afraid Ro wouldn't be able to get through to Logan when Wolverine had her in a choke-hold. Damn, a split personality... that's quite a revelation. I hope things'll get better from now on, now that he can finally grieve, accept what happened, let go.
And Charles... will he make it, or is it too late already?

How sad !!!!! I hope that Charles is going to be ok. update soon.

P.S. Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Everything fit so perfectly. I was totally surprised by the revelations in this story. I know I mentioned that before but I left out that the revelation of how their daughter died was a complete shock, very sad. I loved that, the originality of it, very well thought out, and the whole split personality thing another original and well written idea. I was glad to read over these and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.