Well, that turned me into an emotional wreck. You did an excellent job at conveying Logan's grief. That was painfully beautiful. And Charles. I'm guessing he passed away. That's really sad. Because he and Ororo weren't able to have their proper reunion before TLV got the best of him.

I felt horribly for everyone in this chapter. Please update as soon as you can. This is one of my favorites!

Man. That was soooooooooo good.

It just wrings you out to read this chapter, because there is so much going on it, and all of it ties the whole story together. Finding out Logan's role in the death of Ororo's parents was a huge secret to reveal, but this was even bigger, and no wonder the poor guy cracked. I love his memories of Amahra, they were very tangible and moving. I hope you will update this again as your time allows.

Good to know that he's still got some friends out there. Jean searching out Ororo for her help really took me by surprise :) I hope she's right about Ro being able to help Logan.
Maverick and Ackens... gah! They can't just get away with what they did. Bastards! *grumbles*

How sad !!!!! I hope that Charles is going to be ok. update soon.

P.S. Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Everything fit so perfectly. I was totally surprised by the revelations in this story. I know I mentioned that before but I left out that the revelation of how their daughter died was a complete shock, very sad. I loved that, the originality of it, very well thought out, and the whole split personality thing another original and well written idea. I was glad to read over these and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Ach! So very well done. Not only the confrontation between Logan and the child, but the explanation of her sickness. Framed very well. Brilliant.

Great chapter!!!! I have to know what happens to Logan and Storm. Is Storm preganat becasue She and Logan sleep together alot and with no potection I would gather that she would be. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.