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Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-07 - 07:04 am Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Wow there is a lot going on. I wonder if now that she knows a bit more about her past she can pull together her fractured life also knowing that her brother doesn't hate her. Speaking of fractured life...dang that DR exercise blew up in their faces. I wonder what it will mean for Logan and the mission. And what is the deal in Genosha. Hmm....

Reviewer: irish_sunset Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 06:55 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

WTF! Is going on?

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 03:40 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Aha! The chapter is fixed! Well it's absolutely awsome. I loved the cute little scene between Ororo and her brother. The Logan part is down right disturbing though. Why would the play such mind-fucking games with him? Okay more soon, please!!!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 01:11 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

That's it. I'm never writing again. I always feel like an amateur after reading one of your updates. There was a deep commitment to the story, fantastic dialogue, and such a feeling of tension running throughout that it was very tangible. Good work.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-09-07 - 02:35 am Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

Oh no! Poor Logan... Why did that bastard do that to him? Did he kill every member of his team? Man, I have a feeling he'll be filled with even more self-loathing. Thumbs up on making Ororo and T'Challa siblings instead of *gag* love interests.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-07 - 10:50 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

*Breathing a huge sigh of relief* I can live with this. It's curious as it echo's, and no pun intended, your Desert Rose story. I have to mention this because it threw me for a few seconds, you have T'Challa saying "I am the first born son of T’Challa . . .” Of course I read on and saw what you meant but thought you should know.

Well! This is really going in an entirely different direction than expected. Powerful ending. And btw, I don't mind the lull between updates, gives me time to keep up being as busy as I am but now you must update ASAP! ;D


Author's Response: Oop...! Looks like I wasn't any more awake the 2nd time around than the 1st. sheesh, i really do need to stop writing & posting in the middle of the night...lol Thanks for letting me know; I've fixed it (I know, I know, really anal, but I can't help it!) And thanks for the review, too! ;)

Reviewer: tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-07 - 10:33 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt. 3

-.- update faster >.< , great chptr btw =D

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-08-07 - 12:17 pm Title: Prologue (Worlds Apart)

im so glad you updated this story. so does this mean your going to rewrite all the chapters?

Author's Response: No...no re-write, just picking up where I left off. Hope u enjoy!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-07 - 11:57 am Title: Logan's Run, pt.2

This is so beautiful. Sad, but so beautifully written... I hate to see Ro and Logan hurt that much, feeling so alone, still remembering each other, both in so much pain...
Is that T'Challa picking Ro up in Cairo?
Great, now I need more! Update soon, if you can :)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-07 - 11:21 am Title: Logan's Run, pt.1

Wow, that was quite the revalation! I never expected something like that. Poor Ro. And poor Logan. Damn, so sad.
What was it N'Daire gave Logan before she went into the room?
Now that I got back to reading your updates I realize how much I missed this story :)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-29-06 - 10:55 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt.2

Now this is an intriguing turn of events. A very interesting development that's got me more than curious to see what's in store for Ororo - please not T'Challa!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-29-06 - 10:36 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt.1

Not that I ever forgot how wonderful this story is but reading the last two chapters I was brung to new appreciation for your talent! It's been an age since I've actually had time and the desire for that matter to sit down and read RoLo again, partly because of the mess in Black Panther but also due to many other personal factors, one reason I understand why you haven't updated as fast as you'd like but that meant it was easier for me to get caught up which was a benefit for me at least! On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: MDANCER Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-28-06 - 02:30 am Title: First Impressions, pt. 2

I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE IT'S EASY TO READ ITS DESCRIPTIVE, AND I WELL LOVE IT...DUH. LOL. I still have plenty more to read, but I just wanted to compliment you. I can't wait to get to the LOGAN/ORORO part. MDANCER : 0 )


Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-06 - 07:44 pm Title: Logan's Run, pt.2

I sure hope that youa ren't going for the whole Ororo & T'Challa storyline!! I mean...Why do i get the feeling Ororo is somehow involved with Logan's next mission. And how did those guys know Roro was coming anyway? Hmm...the plot thickens.

Reviewer: MDancer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-06 - 02:08 pm Title: Prologue (Worlds Apart)

Finally, I have some time to sit back on my a**, and read these great stories being posted here. lol.This prologue kept me interested enough to find out what's going to happen next! With such great writting I bet the rest of it's gonna be just as exciting. I wonder why Ororo wont open this letter and I wonder what's going on that Logan's gotta run off during a very important meeting :)...

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