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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 08-18-12 - 08:30 pm Title: Plague Burial

Ok, so it has been some years, but this is still one heck of a read, even unfinished. If by chance you read this review, I hope it spurs you if but a little...okay a lot to finish this. A A

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-07-06 - 07:46 pm Title: Plague Burial

That was deep. Ms. Killer meet Mr. Killer and both on the road to reformation (he being much further along). Good stuff.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-06 - 10:47 pm Title: Plague Burial

That was a very moving chapter. I hope you write more very soon. I think this shows the pain and sorrow in all our lives, things we wish we could change in our past but most are unable or unwiling to take a chance and face them. That is the trully sad part when you fail to embrace the parts of your past that will in the long run a stronger person.

Reviewer: joe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-06 - 09:14 am Title: Plague Burial

this is just starting ta get interesting ya gotta update soon please would love ta see the reaction when logan show's her his powers and vice-versa
keep up the good work

joe

Author's Response: I will try to get an update up soon. Now, that you mention it, i would also like to see both of their reactions to each other's mutant powers. The imagination train is on the tracks!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-06 - 07:42 am Title: Plague Burial

OMG an update! Thanks so much for going on with this story!
This chapter was really worth the wait :) Ro, her secrets, and dark past; that's so totally different and I love it!
I'm glad Logan found her and didn't back off after the knife attack, which was pretty cool. Even cooler was the scene with the gun and what she said LOL. Bad ass Ro!
But still he stayed, got even closer. She's beginning to open up to him. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad Logan had the balls to approach Ororo after that knife attack also. I mean, i tried that on a guy once and well...long story. He was a big wuss anyways. Not as ballsy as our Logan.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-06 - 07:39 pm Title: Plague Burial

when you warned me this was corny, part of myself was prepared for some sap and crap- i'm capable of it, so i know corny, but THIS... i was not prepared for. I could've sworn my heart stopped or at least slowed a bit.It was amazing, touching, beautiful, poignant, powerful, captivating... i can go on and on, but I swear i meant it! You are amazing... PS i WANt that poem! when can i find it???

Author's Response: *wipes tear from face* Thanks, that review means alot coming from you. I don't want you dying on me so i don't know if i should write more heart stopping chapters. Hmmm...the decisions. lol ; )

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-06 - 07:37 pm Title: Plague Burial

OMFG....I am...well, speechless. It's been too long between updates!! You have a tremndous gift and talent for the written word Layde. I can only hope you bless us with more updates soon. I loved the last of this. "I'd like that." OMG, and the poem was beautiful. This was deep on profound levels. I can't believe you worried about this!! *applauding*

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, Windrider. They are of course much appreicated. More updates shall be provided on a monthly basis. Well, hopefully.

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