Whoa! I'm blown away...again. If I could rate this I'd give it 100, forget the pitiful little 10. You're one of my favorite authors. Just keep doing what you do best. ^_^

I Trully love this fic. There is so many levels of emotions and issues displayed here. I actually read this some weeks back, when you posted it on adultfanfiction.net. I'll email you soon to talk more about this fic. perfect writing as always.

Please pardon the long review, it’s just you don’t see stories like this everyday. There's Porn w/o Plot, there's Porn w/ Purpose. Please excuse my wanting to slap you around for calling this porn. The without-a-doubt-hot-naked-action going on here is clearly secondary to the nuances of emotion and the levels of eroticism offered here. The parallels between Kurt Wagner's crisis of faith and Logan's personal feelings of failure over his inability to live up to the tenets of the Bushido are so clear here. The action that follows is the exploration of one's self induced limitations of expression of self and whatever mores and constraints a belief system may weigh on that expression. All released, of course, by the relationship between Ororo and Logan. Watching this dynamic between Ro and Lo and the level of freedom and completeness this pairing offers, can't you somewhat believe and even root for it? Historically, Logan is seen as this gruff, oversexed, alpha male brute who is wont to leaving teeth marks all over his conquests in a sign of his power. Ororo is seen as prudish almost indifferent on one hand or weepy and sexually passive the next. Here you can see how so many years of long established friendship and trust along with their own respective natures couple almost perfectly and create this almost symbiotic relationship. Here they are essentially freed of whatever held them back before. Logan's core motivations and anger really can be seen as coming from a sense of insecurity. Here there is no longer the insecurity. He is in a relationship that has no boundaries and yet no leeway for betrayal. He feels power through her sense of power. His power is amplified by her not wielding hers without his permission so his sense of the "mineness" is secured. Ororo, on the other hand, is free to express herself as freely as possible without the sense of being held back and limited. She is wanton, feckless, completely in awe of her powers over men. This relationship frees her to be in true goddess form. There is a level of comfortability here I envy. I guess then it is porn. Relationship porn cause there's stuff being done here I wish I could do with my significant other (sigh). And don't let the Author's Notes get you twisted. I'm not just reviewing cause she referenced me. This is truly a great freaking story. I'm honored she gave me a shout out but obviously the artistry and effort was all hers.