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|stormlover||02-18-14 - 03:19 am||8: Chapter 7||Signed|
|Oh you are so wrong to leave it hanging right there. I hope you pick this one up again. I love Logan's character.|
|RhiannonUK||08-26-07 - 02:47 pm||8: Chapter 7||Anonymous|
|You are NOT going to leave this unfinished are ya?|
I hope you haven't abandoned this story just as it's picking up pace. Please tell me ya haven't.
|OriginalCeenote||03-26-07 - 06:06 pm||8: Chapter 7||Anonymous|
|You always leave us champing at the bit, slavering hungrily for an update, knock us over the head with a chapter well-written, insightful, and full of thoughts we never thought we would have about these characters, since you always manage to keep them fresh.|
Now, I know you will make us wait weeks, even MONTHS, for another update, you cruel, cruel woman, you! There you go again!!! I like how you brought in Raven, and the tense little scene with Jean and Logan. It hit the spot.
|Dragon||03-26-07 - 04:52 pm||8: Chapter 7||Anonymous|
|Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.|
|Nancy||12-31-06 - 03:34 am||1: Prologue||Anonymous|
|Great story so far.|
|Moaricai||10-01-06 - 08:40 am||7: Chapter 6||Anonymous|
|damn, i thought u abandoned this story long ago....|
it's nice suprise to see it updated. gives me hope to see others fine stories that seems to be forgotten.
|tam||10-01-06 - 02:18 am||7: Chapter 6||Anonymous|
|TY pari :D|
great update, gd you got logans anger in there ^^
|bug||06-28-06 - 06:02 am||6: Chapter 5||Anonymous|
|ahhh...i was devistated when i realized this story wasn't complete. i hope hope hope that you will continue it and finish it. i love it and the characterization is right on.|
|Rising Phoenix||05-13-06 - 06:19 pm||6: Chapter 5||Anonymous|
|This is a good start. I am interested to see more...how Logan and Ororo work together without mutant powers. Will there be an update soon???|
|Lyger||01-05-06 - 07:41 am||1: Prologue||Anonymous|
|Stormcrow||07-25-05 - 06:11 pm||6: Chapter 5||Signed|
|I am really enjoying your police spine on all of this. and i have a feeling that it wll only get better...I have an idea who the killer is but will keep that to myself incase i am wrong.|
|thewindrider278||07-23-05 - 03:03 am||6: Chapter 5||Anonymous|
|Pari, girl, finally some updates!!! I was beginning to wonder what happened to you! LOL, Logan is such a cynical bitch. Keeping America "pure".... psh, gee, I wonder where he came from? You have to forgive my attitude.... I just hate these arguments. I like the way the story is unfolding, kinda reminds me of Law and Order. Keep it up girl... I can't wait for more!|
|Rhapsody81||07-22-05 - 07:19 am||6: Chapter 5||Anonymous|
|was short, but thanks. You'v ebeen awefully quite in terms of stories. |
|Digital Tempest||07-22-05 - 07:14 am||6: Chapter 5||Anonymous|
|Oh snap! An update! :D I don't think it was boring at all. Being that I love shows like Law and Order and CSI, I'm just eating this whole fic up. I could just imagine the horrific scenes you desribed in this chapter. And you just have to love 'Ro for putting Logan in his place about "pure Americans". |
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