I have read stories like this befor and i realy enjoy reading about Logan and Ororo ending up with one another and being happy and loved by each other. So i'm a helpless romantic so shoot me, i like seeing Logan my favorite Beserker end up with the most exotic, erotic ,sexy, beautiful, loving, careingand smartwoman known as Ororo Monroe

Author's Response: Trust me, you and me both. LOL.

WHAT TO SAY I LOVE YOUR WORK AND STORY

Author's Response: I love that you love, my work and my story. So thanks very much.

I LIKE THE FACT HOW YOU SHOW HOW ORORO IS THE ONE PERSON EVERYONE DEPENDS ON AND LOGAN IS FINDING HER MORE ALLURING. LOGAN IS FINDING HIS FEET AND SHOWING HIS TYPE OF CARING TO KITTY AND JUBILTION. I LOVE THIS STORY LISA

Author's Response: I'm really happy you like the story, and that you like how I'm portraying the characters. So thanks a lot for liking my story.

I haven’t come here in a long time and I hardly ever log in anymore when I review but today’s your lucky day. I remember reading this on fanfiction.net and thinking this story was badly written and giving you constructive criticism which you took like a big baby going off to cry to mommy but I've read through this now and can see you've gotten better. You aren't over describing things now which is a relief but you have a lot of mistakes that a beta could maybe help you with. There’re two things I didn’t like about it and one was that Rory is a weird nickname to me cause there’s a Rory who used to be in Excalibur, a dude, and Logan kept calling her name all the time when real life people don’t do that but that’s being picky. The 2nd thing was Rogue saying Ah see ya’ll later Logan,” which if you decipher it would mean I see you all later, Logan which makes no sense unless she’s illiterate. Some things I didn’t understand at all like what the way you used doughtily which didn’t make any sense in that sentence and what is a grimme? And who says ya twos? So maybe I’m just not worldly enough to know the meanings and that would be on me but other than that the story has improved with each chapter. I know you won’t think this is a nice review but I couldn’t resist telling you what I thought when I found this story again but whatever. Would I recommend this story? Maybe but I wouldn't not recommend it at this point.

Author's Response: Well, hello Nienna. Didn't expect to see you pop up. Still think I was a baby about everything, huh? You seem to still have a little grudge about it too. Well I'm still sorry you see it like that, I just saw it as defending myself, not "running to Mommy" as you put it, but whatever. It's nice that you think I improved, so thank you. And with all my terms you pointed out, they are slang terms that people use often. Maybe you have never herd people talk like that, but I have (and of all walks of life too). So again, thanks for stopping by and reviewing.

very exciting! keep going please

Author's Response: I will keep going, you don't have to worry about that.

Okay, I've been more than patient...Where's the update? Huh? ::smiles:: Hurry would ya? This is the third time I've read the story and I like it more each time. Update! :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry Windrider1. I know I'm taking too long, but I promise that I will have the next chapter up before the end of the month. I'm happy that it made you read my fic 3 times already though. LOL.

Damn that Shadow King...at least that is who I think it is. Keep this story coming, I am absolutely lovin' it!!!!

Author's Response: Maybe you're wrong...maybe you're right. You'll just have to sit tight and find out. I'm happy you liked this chapter.