Date: 08-29-05 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
Finally! I can't wait till the next chapter when Ro and Logan can really talk.
Date: 08-28-05 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
wow, i had to re-read the entire story to re-familiarize myself with it and i must say i like it all the more and the direction it is headed.
Date: 08-28-05 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
You are posting these chapters quicker than I can read them. This story is really starting to heat up. Just the way I like it. LOL. Again, this story is great. Keep those chapters coming. :-)
Date: 08-28-05 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
this is an excellent story. Nice build up and thorough writing. Great job can't wait to read more. :D
Date: 08-27-05 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
Damn, but I loved this chapter. Simply divine. After all of that beautiful build-up, a wonderfully sweet prelude and a kiss. And what a kiss it was! With all of the smirking matchmakers at the mansion, it amazes me that Logan and Ororo have been in such denial. But hopefully they'll take a few steps forward, rather than back, after their discussion. Another beautifully written and executed chapter. Looking forward to more. And soon.
Date: 08-27-05 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
Truly an excellent story. Your writing is excellent and you've really captured the characters. I can see every scene play out in my mind. Keep up the fantastic job. I eagerly await the next chapter(s).
Date: 08-27-05 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
wow....a lot of development in the story. Love the way you are able to express all the emotions. next one??
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
I agree with windrider!! This story is exquisite! At times I feel that rush of excitement for Ro/Lo and then that knock at my heart for the love they share for each other,altough both are too stubborn to do or say anything! This is a great story! Please!More!
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You
I am in love with this story. I truly am. Beautiful, emotional, well written. I can not wait for more. love how you write Ororo, I can see her in my head, and I feel for her. Superb!! :D