Wow. Emotionally jarring and turbulent. I can't wait to find out what's going on with Logan and why these people want Ro so bad. Update soon.

From what I have read so far, very good job. Other than a couple of minor punctuation foibles, you have successfully bypassed the usual trip ups of fanfic that determines whether a reader would want to follow the story past the first chapter. You avoided fanfic character cliche. You subtlely touched on but didn't beat us over the head with character traits. Your dialogues, cadance and reactions were very natural and human. Your action measured and moved along very well. You now have a reader in me. I hope to see more of your well-constructed work.

Wow, I am in love with this story. I love your portrayal of Logan. Especially his relationships with Rogue, Scott and our girl, Ro. Please update soon.

Oooooohhh. I got a wee bit misty there. ;) Loved the chapter and am incredibly anxious for some Wolverine retaliation and to find out whyt whoever is doing this has such a mad-on for Ororo. These attacks don't seem random, nor motivated entirely by her being a mutant. At least that's my feelings on it. I can't wait for more!! This is one of my all time fave RoLo's.

0.o What a "nice" birthday phone call... Totally understandable she ticked out like that, heh. I hope she's gonna be fine though. Those guys really seem to observe her and know quite a lot of detailed stuff. Too much for my taste. Mmh... was the delivery guy one of them? Or do they have a spy inside the school already? Is Jeffrey who he claims to be? Maybe everything was a setup from the very beginning... Me wonders. You really got me thinking! :)

wowe. dude. that was a shocker. agh! resolve it!!

you have brought fluff to new levels my friend. PUPPIES?!! they're the fluffingest damn thing in the universe. that chapter was sweeter than strawberry syrup