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Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-05 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You

You are posting these chapters quicker than I can read them. This story is really starting to heat up. Just the way I like it. LOL. Again, this story is great. Keep those chapters coming. :-)

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-05 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You

this is an excellent story. Nice build up and thorough writing. Great job can't wait to read more. :D

Reviewer: Roseviolet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You

Damn, but I loved this chapter. Simply divine. After all of that beautiful build-up, a wonderfully sweet prelude and a kiss. And what a kiss it was! With all of the smirking matchmakers at the mansion, it amazes me that Logan and Ororo have been in such denial. But hopefully they'll take a few steps forward, rather than back, after their discussion. Another beautifully written and executed chapter. Looking forward to more. And soon.

Reviewer: Roseviolet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Awakening

Pitch perfect! Once again, you've hit all the right notes with these characters. I'm loving these little moments between Logan and Scott, especially when Scott manages to catch Logan unawares as he did here. Priceless! It will be interesting to see Jean re-integrate to life at the mansion..not to mention seeing Logan come to terms with his growing feelings for Ororo. Another fabulous chapter.

Reviewer: Roseviolet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Why

Very nice job handling a touchy subject like bigotry. And the emotional responses were just right, neither under nor over stated as is often the case. You've got a great knack for hitting all right psychological / emotional notes with these characters. Very realistic and very compelling. As always, thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: poetzproblem Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You

Truly an excellent story. Your writing is excellent and you've really captured the characters. I can see every scene play out in my mind. Keep up the fantastic job. I eagerly await the next chapter(s).

Reviewer: Roseviolet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Six: Irrational

The plot thickens! I really like the approach that you've taken in building Ororo and Logan's relationship. Loved Logan's reaction to her "challenge." And poor Scott! With all that tension in that mansion, something's gotta give. And soon. Thanks for another wonderfully written chapter.

Reviewer: Roseviolet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Five: Let It Rain

*sigh* This is precisely the type of the character development that has been missing for my beloved Storm in the 616 comic series for a long time. I don't supposed you'd be interested in writing for Marvel? (lol) It seems that everyone is expecting Jean to be the same person they knew before Alkali Lake, so it'll be interesting to see how much of the "dark" personality "sticks." An interesting take on the Phoenix persona. Another great job.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You

wow....a lot of development in the story. Love the way you are able to express all the emotions. next one??

Reviewer: Roseviolet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Four: Scent

Well, things are certainly getting more interesting! Loved the characterizations of Logan as teasing friend and overprotective big brother. Oftentimes, he's portrayed rather one-dimensionally, so I love the different facets you've incorporated here. Now on to the mission to Alkali Lake!

Reviewer: Roseviolet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Three: Windrider

Great character development and interactions in this chapter. Your description of Ororo's windriding and communing with the storm was marvelous. I love the imagery and depth of emotion that it evoked. You have quite a way with words. Thanks for a truly wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You

I agree with windrider!! This story is exquisite! At times I feel that rush of excitement for Ro/Lo and then that knock at my heart for the love they share for each other,altough both are too stubborn to do or say anything! This is a great story! Please!More!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Here's Lookin' at You

I am in love with this story. I truly am. Beautiful, emotional, well written. I can not wait for more. love how you write Ororo, I can see her in my head, and I feel for her. Superb!! :D

Reviewer: wolvster Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter One: Mission

I love this story!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter Six: Irrational

That's right Logan, no more Jean...it's 'Ro's time now. LOL. Still absolutely lovin' this story. Keep up the MARVELous work. Can't wait to get to the RoLo loving that I know you have in store for us. I love your portrayal of the characters, it's very real. I love the idea that they don't fall head-over-heels for each other right away...they are taking their time getting to that point, but you can absolutely see it coming. Again, I really love it!

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