Penname: Pari [Contact] Real name: Parisian
Member Since: 05-10-03
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
I love RoLo, always have. I also love Spuffy (Spike/Buffy), and Poltergeist The Legacy (Nick Chick:)
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Reviews by Pari
Summary: Nothing is thicker than blood not even adamantium
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6828 Read Count: 6598
[Report This] Published: 06-01-07 Updated: 06-28-07
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 06-03-07 Title: Chapter 1: Eyes and Blood

Just a suggestion, you may want to space outt he paragraphs, because they are all jumbled adn makes it difficult to read adn follow what's going on.

Author's Response: I did not think of that i shall start dong so on my next chapters sorry for that thank you for pointing it out though

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 05-30-08 Title: None

Excellent!! I look forward to reading more, and soon I hope.

Lost Time by Fionabeam Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: If you don't like death then I wouldn't read this.
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Horror, Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 463 Read Count: 1580
[Report This] Published: 06-02-08 Updated: 06-02-08
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 06-02-08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I typically don't like stories that have the character death of one of my faves, but you did it beautifully. Logan's raw and desparate emotions made me truly feel for him. I wanted to roar right along with him. This was great writing and I'll be looking forward to reading more from you.

Summary: For all the years he can remember the Wolverine has been an animal first and a man second. As his world starts to open and new people emerge as well as new enemies, will he have the strength to leave the animal behind or will it consume him. (Movie-verse retelling,)
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 115407 Read Count: 37643
[Report This] Published: 08-18-08 Updated: 12-25-10
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 11-24-08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11: Heaven & Earth

I am really enjoying this story, you've done a fantastic job of softening Wolverine without making him seem too weak. Bravo, because that's not an easy thing to do, but you did it so well. I am truly looking forward to reading more of this and I hope you'll update it sooner than later.

Author's Response: I'm pleasantly surprised about this review and thanks for the compliment. I'm honestly working a lot on this story and I'm glad so many people are enjoying it. I think Logan's always been a soft touch, it just takes the right events to really bring it out. Writing this story has been so fun because I'm trying to venture into some different areas to bring out a truly new experience. Half the stuff that's in the story now, wasn't originally planned when I sat down to plot out the events. So I can't tell you all of what's gonna happen in the future. But either way I think it will be a fun ride for everyone. ^^

Seven Days by windrider1 Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Seven random days, in non-linear order, during the lives and relationship of Ororo and Logan.
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3280 Read Count: 2580
[Report This] Published: 09-06-09 Updated: 09-06-09
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 09-08-09 Title: Chapter 1: Seven Days

That was amazing!! Beautifully written, a story worth telling and you told it perfectly.

Author's Response: **bows** Thank YOU so much for reviewing and hosting this site! It's always wonderful when you pop on and review! **does happy dance**

Summary: The first of the series.
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 456 Read Count: 2186
[Report This] Published: 04-08-10 Updated: 04-08-10
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 04-08-10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was too damned adorable :)

Author's Response: I try. ;)

Forced by soapyharlequin Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 42]
Summary: When Ororo went to Logan's room to ask him a simple request she had no idea that the trade off would be so costly….
Categories: General, NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35684 Read Count: 11529
[Report This] Published: 12-30-10 Updated: 10-02-11
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 01-03-11 Title: Chapter 1: Indecent Proposal

WHOA!! I didn't think I was gonna enjoy this from reading the summary, but I did (I'm genuinely surprised). You have a talent for putting pen to paper. Please keep going, I'm anxious to see how it goes.

Oh and I have to interject my own opinions for a moment...Plz don't let anyone influence your style and how you choose to write your stories, I have said it here many, many times it's your story write it how 'you' want it...;) There's my 2 cent now take it or give it to a charity...lol

This is War by Ogrenaught Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: it is not the outcome of the battle that what matters...its choosing to fight
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339 Read Count: 1967
[Report This] Published: 06-05-11 Updated: 06-05-11
Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked
Date: 06-05-11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How the hell did you make me love this sad, empowering, sweet, lovely story? My hats off to you, this was brilliantly written.

Author's Response: Thank you so very kindly Pari :) I am really happy you enjoyed this!! this one did kind of come from the heart

Summer Break by ClaireLeon Rated: AO: Adults Only!!! Liked [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Summer break has started and Logan is antsy for some action. Ororo is caught in his crosshairs!
Categories: Porn W/O Plot
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2028 Read Count: 5193
[Report This] Published: 06-13-12 Updated: 06-13-12
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 06-13-12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not fully getting this yet, I see that it's not complete so I'm sure you'll be adding more to explain this chapter. At this point it's not porn w/o plot, that was rape w/o reason. I hope you provide a reason. I myself have used rape in I think two of my RoLo fics, and in one it was Logan raping Ororo, but there was a 'reason' behind that, in fact there was a reason explained in both fics.

So I will give this fic the benefit of the doubt and wait to see how it plays out, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: This is not supposed to be about Logan raping Ororo. I posted the second chapter and it should clarify the scenes of chapter one and the thinking behind it. I would appreciate it if you would read it and let me know your honest opinion!! I based this off a conversation I had with a friend and her boyfriend, I picked their brains thoroughly. I tried to incorporate as much as i could, and hope that everyone understands where i was going and appreciates it. Thank you so much for the review!!! Jade