Penname: NemesisBecoming [Contact] Real name: j.
Member Since: 02-10-04
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Thank you all for reading my first fiction. I thank you for your support and bask in your collective well wishes.

But... REVIEWING IS MANDATORY! :P

4/4/2007: In general, I know that my stories do run long, but I ask if folks can review, positive or negative - it doesn't matter. Feedback is the only payback we see in our fanfiction efforts. And it takes me a long time to update oftentimes because of the amount of personal involvement I put into it. So please review. Please flame me or give me suggestions. Please feel free to let me know what I'm doing wrong and what you think is working. I'm hoping one day I can improve enough in the craft to one day do proper original fiction. Until that time comes, you guys are my writing workshop. Work me over, people. :) Thanks.
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Summary: An AU about the aftermath of Civil War if the pro reg side had won, and the consequences of it
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7298 Read Count: 7485
[Report This] Published: 04-05-07 Updated: 04-08-07
Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked
Date: 04-05-07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting. Not familiar with the Civil War storyline at all. But I like your descriptions. I like the story and enjoy this beginning. Your descriptions of a post-apocolyptic NYC was chilling seeing how I'm a native - clutch the pearls. Look forward to following this one!

Author's Response: I love AU's and post apocalypse stories, so I had to make a dive for it. hope you will like it and I'll do my best with the updates! =)