Inspiration for that story, huh? Hmmm. Gotta think about that one...there's so much rich feeling going on in that one, you've built such a nice framework of how they related to each other when they were kids. We have to see how things played out when they were either older teens, or perhaps fast forward to what makes them kind of shield themselves from each other as adults.

But...for this story, I will review it as well. I love it, it makes me smile and cry with each new chapter. Logan's pain just swallows you up and spits you out because it's so tangible. I can see that scene in her bedroom clear as a bell. And yet, in the midst of all this sorrow and anger going on, I laughed my butt off about the line about Bobby and Alex having a lame fight equivalent to two second graders slapping each other. Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. Good on you, mate.

Author's Response: I'm going to go over the notes I made and hope it comes back to me. *sigh* It will come back to me. It has to. I really appreciate you mentioning that ever so often, as it makes me think about it more instead of burying it in the back of my head. My friends say I'm random like that. Here I am writing all this pathos and I randomly pop up with something like Bobby and Alex's fighting. I was re-reading some of my comics, specifically the one after the She Lies with Angels arc when Josh (Icarus) first comes to the school. And there's just something about the way that Bobby is all on Alex's scent during the WHOLE comic that makes me laugh. So, I had to randomly find a way to put that in. ;)

Hi.

Interesting beginning. The paragraph formatting got kind of close halfway through, so I might fix that to make it easier to read, use the double paragraph spacing that you have in the first half. Watch a couple of spellings, too; "turquoise, sugary, little, and Rogue" all need fixing.

I'm enjoying this, but I'm wondering if Logan has any suspicions about Ororo's pregnancy? My curiosity is also piqued about whether there is someone else in the picture, from what you have written so far? Keep updating this.

All right. You've got me hooked! I'm interested to find out more about who Jesha's parents are. Nifty powers, too.

Author's Response: I am glad I can keep you hooked, thanks for reading!!!!!!!! YEAH! You made my day and reviews give me incentive to write more.

There you go again. Another perfect chapter. Darn that Logan, he's just hotter than a tamale, isn't he? Itch scratched...hoo, boy. More great lines and innuendoes, Windy.

Great interactions with Logan and Forge, I was hoping for that. Great tension, great little "pissing contest" with the two men not trusting each other. This feels a lot different from your Ultimate fics. I love those fics, but this story is so wonderfully tangible, and I can see the scenes unfolding like they were happening right in my living room. Wish they were...damn it.

CeeCee

Author's Response: **blushes** Awww, thanks, Cee. I want this to feel different. Two different verses, but I'm sure the styles will eventually bleed togather. I'm still hammering out how I write best, so in each story there's a little experimenting. ;) Thanks much for the review, darlin'.

That's great. I'm so glad you are submitting your work to different media, Tempest. You're just go good at it. Good luck!

As for this...more elegantly woven drama and the complicated relationship between these two that I have grown to love. I can't wait for the other four chapters. It's so amazing to see Ororo as this hard, stalwart character coming apart at the seams and not wanting to open up. Again, their roles seem reversed, which is always a fun change in fanfic. Great, great, great.

Author's Response: Tell that to my husband. He says is pseudo-feminist ranting because I do tend to make female characters a little hard. LOL.

Whoa. The Danger Room smackdown came earlier than expected, in the den instead. Sigh. Another cliffhanger, you naughty girl. Knowing you, and your propensity for fast updates, I know I won't have to wait long for more goodness. I love Beast in this, did I mention that??? Can't wait to see him go off; enough of the calm, scholarly stuff, let's see him go buckwild on Trask's ass!

I also can't wait to see what else is going on in Boston.

That gave me chills.