Penname: OriginalCeenote [Contact] Real name: CeeCee
Member Since: 02-22-06
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I scribble stories and the occasional drawing. I like different Marvel pairings, but RoLo is my favorite.
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The Brat Pack by Gaineewop Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 54]
Summary: A nearly-satirical look at life at Mutant High. Logan is introduced to the wild and spunky duo of Dazzler and Storm a year after he comes to the mansion. For a man always sure of himself, something about Storm knocks him off kilter and endagers his relationship with Jean Grey.
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Comedy
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22317 Read Count: 12422
[Report This] Published: 06-28-07 Updated: 07-21-08
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 07-21-08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Holy Matrimony

*applause*

Summary: A first chapter to a long story!
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: None
Genres: Action
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13477 Read Count: 10899
[Report This] Published: 07-05-07 Updated: 09-14-09
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 03-06-09 Title: Chapter 3: A Job

the first chapter with the snakes tickled me, totally reminded me of the original Raiders of the Lost Ark movie, so this chapter made me smile. Three mil? That's some nice cheese.

Author's Response: If only we could make that kind of money and do a fun job like this...

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 07-07-07 Title: None

I love this, as usual. So many good lines (and that one about the beer tits rings a bell, makes me laugh every time I hear it). Love Logan in this one. I like how she pegged him as walking wounded while they were at the bar. THe slap on the butt was great. I like how she dropped her prim demeanor as she kept talking to him.

More, more, more! Don't forget the old ones, but i want this one too. I'm greedy.

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 07-10-07 Title: None

This looks familiar, did you post this to Fanfiction.net?

Nice short preview chapter.

Summary: Death comes for us all, but sometimes for different reasons
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26363 Read Count: 14045
[Report This] Published: 07-10-07 Updated: 10-28-11
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 07-19-07 Title: Chapter 2: The Breaking

Glad to see the tags took this time!

I'm still getting a kick out of Jubes, since she is pretty believable and has some great lines. The use of the crows is excellent, gives this a "The Raven" feel a la Edgar Allen Poe, or even the movie "The Crow." Good stuff. It's ironic that Ro had a bad feeling about the alley before, and that's where Logan showed up in this chapter.

Author's Response: Nevermore right ? lol Thanks Cee :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 07-10-07 Title: Chapter 1: The Foruth Seal

Something looks like it didn't take with the bold/centered tags...weird.

Other than that, this looks great. Can't wait to see what else you do with this story. I know you'll do a great job of writing Logan. Storm and Jubes are already very likable. Don't see them paired as sisters in any other fics I have read. The little spark between 'Ro and Nate looks like it will be interesting to read, too.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee I dont know what happend with the bod and center but no biggie :) I hope i do a good job with logan in this it will be a tad different incarnation

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 06-14-08 Title: Chapter 6: In the eyes of the serpent

Our Chet is a talented boy. So help me, just when I think you've impressed me as much as I can BE impressed, you kick it up a notch. And not just because I get first read. I love seeing these chapters uploaded. Logan's badass. Love him. It's probably evil of me that I love the bad characters in this as much as the heroes.

Author's Response: I damn near blush whenever ya give me a compliment Cee lol ya know that means so much coming form ya thanks again

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01-01-70 Updated: 01-01-70
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 07-23-07 Title: None

Wow. That's an intense opener. Can't wait to see what you bring next. I really enjoy Logan in this, and he's been dealt an ugly hand, hasn't he?

Author's Response: He sure has! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 08-07-07 Title: None

Logan has a tough relationship with his daugher. I sense trouble around the corner for him again. The scene at breakfast made me grin.

Author's Response: the scene at breakfast? ha, im confused!

Summary: Being unconquerable lies within yourself. Being conquerable lies within the enemy. 28 days later, it would start with a scream... Post X3.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14987 Read Count: 13877
[Report This] Published: 07-24-07 Updated: 11-06-09
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 07-24-07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Psi Break

It's very telling that Logan was the one who woke up and was obviously listening for her footsteps. I also wonder how she feels about him being the last person to glimpse the last of the real Jean before she died, since it was Ororo's best friend. This pulled at me for reasons like those, and of course for Ororo being so responsive to crises. She's one bad mutha. I can't wait to see who sent out the SOS. Your dialogue is always great, but this time the narrative was a strong selling point.

A Day In The Park by W6C Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: I think the title and rating say all that needs saying.
Categories: General NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10107 Read Count: 4517
[Report This] Published: 08-30-07 Updated: 08-30-07
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 08-30-07 Title: Chapter 1: The Picnic, Part One

I read this on group, and I had to review it here.

I love the scenes and the way they commune with each other. Logan's toes curling in his boots was awesome! That and the image of her teasing him away from his PC while he's just typing away. Good stuff.

Author's Response: Hey Cee! Aw, I like that - "the way they commune"... I guess that's precisely what they do huh? Nice descriptive. Thanks for readin' an' reviewin', it's always a pleasure to hear from you, my friend. --- W6C

Summary: Logan thinking
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 392 Read Count: 2286
[Report This] Published: 09-15-07 Updated: 09-15-07
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 09-15-07 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

All right, Stormcrow's back! How have you been?

I love this because it has that quiet, brooding feel a story with Logan, from his point of view, should have. On the one hand, I'd love to see where you go from here, but on the other, it's compelling enough as a one-shot, too, because of the feeling that's already packed into it. I'm glad you came back to write some more for us.

Author's Response: Yeah I've been away for awhile......just getting my life back together from Katrina....got married had a son.......also thank darlin

Tangled by KendalLogan Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: 'They sat there for what felt like hours, tangled up in a heap of knotted limbs.'
Categories: Ficlets/Songs/Poems
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 534 Read Count: 2344
[Report This] Published: 09-19-07 Updated: 09-19-07
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 09-19-07 Title: Chapter 1: Tangled

Yay! Nothing I like better than a sweet little one-shot with lots of whoopee in it. There was a lot of sensory description in this that took you into their minds. Lots of feeling, without dialogue. Interesting piece. Keep them coming.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it...I'm hoping to write more soon...Thanks for the review, I always look forward to your comments!

Addicted by Noir_Libra Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Just walk away. A simple solution to a complicated situation.
Categories: NC-17
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 907 Read Count: 2444
[Report This] Published: 09-25-07 Updated: 09-25-07
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 09-25-07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too many good things to describe. But I will do it anyway.

I love how this was told from Ororo's POV. The theme was definitely classic, the woman who loves a man against common sense and who can't let go of him. You could feel her torment, it made you wince, yet at the same time you understood how she felt and why. The language was smooth and easy to read.

I hope you'll keep posting stories, woman. This was fantastic.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cee. It really meant a lot. I do hope to keep writing and I hope you update Abandon. :)

Chance by Stormcrow Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 32]
Summary: I decided to actually base this one as a sequel to SPACE OPERA. It has two OC's. For the back ground you might have to read Space Opera. Its not a necessity though.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21151 Read Count: 18148
[Report This] Published: 09-27-07 Updated: 04-12-10
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked
Date: 09-30-07 Title: Chapter 1: the Teacher

Good original characters, something I don't create too often myself. I'm already looking forward to more. And I like the subject matter Logan was teaching. It's always nice to see him written as someone knowledgable and educated.