Again another nice chapter. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing too major. Although, I have to ask, was the Professor Summers you were referring to earlier in the chapter the same Scott Summers that was trying to date Ororo earlier in the story or another Summers? That one threw me for a loop.

I have to say, I'm interesting in what news did Ororo have. I'm guessing he decided to back out of any sort of relationship, but I wonder why? Was the prospect of her leaving for another college too much for him to even warrant an effort?

Oh well we'll see.

Author's Response: Yeah my bad, I've been reviewing some of my other fan fics and Im getting my story all mixed up...thanks for keeping me on my toes I've changed it. The spelling errors? I tried really hard this time ran spell check like 5 times,and read it over about as much...editing isnt one of my strongest areas as you can see...oh well. Like I said if you can point me in the direction of a good beta reader that would be great...if not then Im sure my spelling isnt going to get any better. Thanks for reading.

I have to say, not that the rest of the chapter wasn't enjoyable but the last 2 paragraphs really ignite the whole chapter. Just as things were almost close to making sense, things just became even more chaotic. Very, very interested in seeing what happens next.

Wow, talk about the cat getting let out of the bag. Everything is out in the open now. I really wonder what's going to happen with the Professor and the rest of them.

Not a bad chapter, had a few spelling errors. The think the word you were looking for was "quite" not "quit". Some other small things, no real biggie.

I have to agree with Cee, the Log-Ali exchange was hilarious.

Author's Response: Thanks for catching those for me. Ive made those changes...I'll try not to do the "hot off the press" releases so much...lol

It's actually funny, the way the 90's cartoon portrayed him, Scott pretty much would act that way. lol. Kudos for the authentic Summers reaction.

Author's Response: Lol, thanks.

Uh, hem....Just to let you ladies know, that hurts. A lot! I mean a hell of a whole lot. I mean I could make a 13 page tangent on how much that hurts and it would never be clear enough.

Anyway, despite the whole Vulcan death grip incident..uh.. "cute" story I suppose. Granted that Storm is painted as a sadist here, but I guess that's besides the point.

Author's Response: I know I should have gone into further detail to get across the point of how much it hurts. I played goal in hockey for years, and even a shot off the jock was enough to cause my stomach to turn and my eyes to water. As far as Storm grabbing Wolverine's twig and giggleberries, I should point out there is a completely different second half of the story that I replaced with this. It's much more serious, and was kind of a drag. Plus, Wolverine does heal quickly, just not THAT quickly in THAT area. Or that's how my interpretation is, coming from the line from the ringer in the first movie.

Windy, I have to thank you for this. Slowly but surely I've been trying to return back to the fandom, since my previous commitment seems to be over, but we sometimes need a good push. This was exactly what the doctor ordered.

I have to say not only was this a surprise but it was a pleasant surprise to see your name on the recent story list. Heck you even got Pari reviewing which is no small feat. ^^

This story was a nice change of pace from the stories you usually do. Especially in its presentation. The changing tense and points of view was compelling, it gave the story its own interesting flair.

I especially loved the line about "good old fashion avoidance". That was priceless.

The one question I do have, the section that was right about wedding scene kind of threw me off, i thought Ororo died somehow and it was Logan that despite his ability to heal, that type of pain was something he could never recover from. But then the next line they're both together. So I don't know. Regardless, good story and good to see you're around and still writing. Hope to see more from you in the future. Later lass. ^^

Author's Response: Well, hey there, stranger! First, thank you for this very awesome review! **happy dance** And you're right. She died. The first 3 days are in a scattered linear order, but I really didn't like that overly much so I changed the last 4 to be random. I think I may re-work that though, so it's easier to follow. You're not the first to mention it, so yeah. I'll adjust that. :D

You got a lot of good things going with this story and also some bad things as well. The story starts out very strongly has a good amount of personality with the character and the over feel. I like the gradual build of the relationship between Logan and Ororo.

But midway things start to spiral out a bit. The story goes in a few directions that kinda detract from the main issues of the story. Which made it hard to understand what of all was the important events going on. I don't know if that's because it initially was two chapters combined into one or what.

Also the story just ends with only few of the issues brought up of the story resolved, so there is no real sense of closure with the story. I honestly clicked back to make sure this wasn't supposed to be a one shot and actually had a few more chapters.

Honestly, I would redo this story. You had a lot of elements in the story that you brought up to me as the reader and I had an interest in but then it doesn't relate really to the rest of the story. I'd say, flesh out some of those parts and return to the ending of the story.

I hope this doesn't come out as overwhelming. I think you have a lot talent as a writer. I really like a lot of this story, which is why i'm trying to give out so much insight on it.

Author's Response: No,the story isn't resolved. It's excerpted from longer novel. I just decided to post it here because I thought people might enjoy. The rest of the novel is not RoLo, so I knew I couldn't post it here, but I thought people might want to read this snippet, but since it's too overwhelming I'll probably just take it down. Thanks for the feedback!