Penname: Vas2139 [Contact] Real name: Tina
Member Since: 01-14-13
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Rolo fan , wife and mother of one year old daughter from Arkansas . Just started writing but story on fanfic.net under the name Helltown's Avatar or Go to https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4423419/

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In All LIkelihood by babs Rated: 18 Liked [Reviews - 47]
Summary: Opposites don't attract, but sometimes glitches in the system pair them up. Who knew online dating could sometimes work?
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27525 Read Count: 15817
[Report This] Published: 10-03-13 Updated: 01-11-14
Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 10-10-13 Title: In All LIkelihood

I knew it was Wolvie that saved her. Oh I have to use that "short stop" in my story. That was funny and she left him hanging. Great chap, like I said you don't need a Beta.

Author's Response: I was literally SO CLOSE to having Remy save her so he could mack on Ro and make Logan jealous, but I was like, nah- that sounds stupid AND I REALLY WISH I DID IT! Too late now, right? OMG YOU'RE WRITING A STORY PLEASE LET ME READ IT I LOVE READING STORIES AND I WILL REVIEW RELIGIOUSLY! and duh she had to leave him hanging- gotta build up to smut right? Thank you for liking this, I was so convinced this chapter was shaky and messy. (And thanks for the encouragement about betas, but I'd still like to catch those annoying errors!) You're so amazing! Thank you so much

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 10-11-13 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I cannot wait for them to have their date. I hope Ro can get off her high-horse(she's needs to get laid, bad. LOL) and be nice to Wolvie. Love the Girl time with Maire. Do the guys (Remy & Pete) know that Wolvie netting her?
Great chap as usual.

Author's Response: I'm gonna have to include the fact that Logan hasn't talked to Remy and Piotr in a while! thanks for reminding me- it totally slipped my mind. But in this chapter she's nice so it's not that bad! Thanks for liking this chapter! And I'm gonna check out your story- I found it on fannet

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 10-15-13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you so much for adding my baby Remy, luv the convo between the three friends. Of course Remy has to be Remy. Lol

Why is Logan texting at two in the morning? Umm
Somebody got it bad! See girls be mean to a guy and he's all over you.
Great chap.

Author's Response: Lol I saw how much you liked him in your own story- which I love, btw. You're a great writer. Hahah! that's my philosophy: don't let them think they're special. Thanks so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it! You're so kind!

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed
Date: 10-25-13 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Omg what's really going on? Are Ro & Lo F-Buddies or are they just friends? U don't need a beta ; doing well without one.

Author's Response: I have to thank you for being super faithful- ily for it!

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 10-23-13 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow Ro did a hit it and quit it, love the line where he says " I should have been better." I see that there is still a spark don't get me wrong I love Blue, he's so sweet & caring but Ro & Lo needs to be togheter . Does anyone know they had sex? Like Jesn or Remy? Great chap.
Ps. I promise I'm going to update soon and give you a shout out. Lol

Author's Response: She's a reasonable woman so she has her reasons. And I like inverting the roles! I love blue, too, but this is definitely a RoLo story so they'll end up together! Don't worry! And all will be revealed! Thanks for reviewing! (can't wait for your update)

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed
Date: 10-08-13 Title: In All LIkelihood

I was sweating bullets when Wolvie was doing his presentation . I hope you don't mind but I told Stormlover ( a Rolo writer on FanFic) about your story. it's so good.
Don't about a Beta reader, you're doing great without one.

Author's Response: haha was it really that tense? Sweet! I wanted to make him suffer a little. OMG DID YOU REALLY THAT'S SO SWEET OF YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH I AM SO HAPPY YOU'RE SO WONDERFUL AND KIND I'VE NEVER BEEN RECOMMENDED TO ANOTHER WRITER BY ANYONE BEFORE (THAT I'M AWARE OF THEN IN THE INSTANCE THAT I HAVE I ALSO LOVE YOU.) YOU'RE SO KIND. And thanks for saying I don't need a beta lol. I always worry about grammar since I'm not an english major. You're really wonderful! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 11-06-13 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's ok girl, I went a little AWOL too. So Ro is dating Hank, it's refreshing to see hank being written with flaws. Most stories have him as a saint. So did Wolvie & Ro banged or they really just fell asleep? Have to know what happened!!

Author's Response: Lol you've got a good idea on why I've been so AWOL so thank you for not judging me. And I dislike perfect people so it ain't a thing to write him a little human. And you find out in my new update-- SORRY IT IS SO LATE.

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 01-08-14 Title: In All LIkelihood

Things are getting interesting with Ro & Logan, and why is Scooter hating so hard? Take your time girl

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! You're so wonderful- you know that? Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for always reviewing and your correspondence.

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 01-11-14 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Omg , shit about to hit fan. I can't believe Hank did that to Ro. Karma is a slow train but when it comes, Oh boy! Hope Hank and Scooterget what's coming to them. Great Chap.

Something Primal by Pari Rated: NC-17 Liked [Reviews - 21]
Summary: AU: We find our favorite mutants going through the woes of being 'teenagers' Yup another teeny bopper RoLo fic from moi ;) Writing this off the top of my head, so hopefully it will go somewhere ;) Naw really this is the 'beginning' and I am working on the 'middle', and I know the 'ending'....so it will hopefully not take 'years' to complete, lol. I made the banner for the story from 'my' vision of Ro and Lo in this fic, from pics of Christian Kane and Gabrielle Union, you don't like the image well ask me if I care...go on ask me (in case you're wondering 'I don't care') :P If you read this please take a second to post a review, thank you!
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18929 Read Count: 7496
[Report This] Published: 02-02-14 Updated: 09-02-14
Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 02-04-14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yea new story! Elliot as Wovie, nice. Love leverage and thought he was a hottie. Gabby as storm I never thought about her. When I think of a young storm, Zoe Saldana ( I thinks it's the long legs) comes to my mind but any love the new story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 02-05-14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chap, I see Jean is being a Slutbucket that she is and Logan called her on it. Love the scene with my boo Remy, that man can charm any woman.

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed
Date: 02-09-14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This chap was a trip. I was killing my self laughing when Ro asked those sex questions. It remined me when I carried the vCard . Lol
I knew that Slutbucket was up to no good, hope she's put in her place.

Summary: Charles' dream has finally come true. Mutants rights have been attained and the world has changed. So to have the X-men. No longer are they in the shadows fighting. They are in the forefront as Police Officers. See how the dream became true and what lead to the start of Mutant City X-Force.
Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Action
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10682 Read Count: 4097
[Report This] Published: 04-23-14 Updated: 05-15-14
Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 04-23-14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lmao! I love the banter between Wovie & Scooter. I can't wait for next chapl.

Author's Response: It was fun writing the banter between those two. Chapter 2 will be up soon. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 04-30-14 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooh Cliffhanger! I like you hinted that Wolvie care for Storm with Gambit ribbing him about Storm & Marie. I wonder if Nathan is Cable? I know I have to keep reading and looking forward to it.

Author's Response: Vas, thank you for the review. I loved Gambit ribbing Wolverine too. The words just kinda wrote themselves for those two. As for Nathan as cable? We'll see what the future holds for the little guy. ;)

Reviewer: Vas2139 Signed Liked
Date: 05-16-14 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter!! I'm pregnant with my first and started crying when I read about the babies( still crying) but it made me want those bastards to die more!!! The scene with Jean and Nathan sooo cute( got tyre eyed ). Wolvie finally notice the Goddess in front of him. The quate from Marie , Classic.
Can't wait for more!!!