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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04-28-18 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Needs more Logan& Ororo and then Ororo giving Jean a much needed ass whopping and more sex for Logan& Ororo.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03-16-18 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

needs an ending where they stay together.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-10-16 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

need more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09-08-16 - 10:46 am Title: Chapter 2

Write more soon please.

Reviewer: Kyonna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-30-16 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

Both chapters were HOT. I wish there was more...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-15-15 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter 2

Ending coming soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-15 - 05:58 am Title: Chapter 2

Next chapter,Jean will not be happy. Make it all Rolo.Please

Reviewer: persnikitty5 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-27-12 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

great story!

Reviewer: rolo fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-16-12 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

I still don't see how it works as an explanation? Does that mean that chapter 1 was pretty much roleplaying, with Ororo playing a submissive female to Logan's dominant male? So when she said she didn't want to have sex with him (very explicitly, I might add. their relationship in the first chapter seemed to establish that she did not like Logan at all), she didn't mean it?

That explains things, I guess, but it still didn't sit well with me at all. Maybe it could have been executed/delivered better, since readng this was kind of confusing. Chapter 2 seems to completely contradict Chapter 1. You did, after all, introduce things as Logan knowing Ororo had an extreme dislike for him, but had him looking for her for "entertainment" and then ogling her in a really uncomfortable way (his internal comments of "video girl ass, lips made for cocksucking" were gross and blatantly misogynistic to me)

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-14-12 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

Aaah! That brings chapter one in a better perspective.

Reviewer: dudtheman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06-14-12 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

hmmmm fun story thanks for the read =)

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