
Date: 03-15-18 - 12:55 pm Title: And the winner is....
This story is almost 13 years old , what happens next please finish it.

Date: 02-05-10 - 09:23 am Title: And the winner is....
This story is so funny, I can actually imagine the whole story in my mind lol plz continue

Date: 08-01-06 - 12:04 am Title: And the winner is....
Okay, it's been way too long; please add a few (okay 3 or 4) more chapters to this story.

Date: 07-15-06 - 04:39 am Title: And the winner is....
i really did enjoy reading this story... it kept me laughing and wanting to finish the story. i can't wait for the next chapter!!

Date: 01-18-06 - 09:16 pm Title: And the winner is....
PLEASE WRITE MORE TO THIS STORY! THIS STORY WAS VERY GOOD AND FUNNY. WRITE MORE

Date: 03-29-05 - 09:36 pm Title: And the winner is....
I just have a suggestion, instead of using the word "winning", like in the sentence, "to keep her from winning me", use the word "beat, or beating". Like, "to keep her from beating me".
It's a good story, write some more.
Author's Response: Oh thanks, i'll keep that in mind next time i write a chapter. Keep the reviews coming!

Date: 03-27-05 - 09:20 pm Title: And the winner is....
I really liked this chapter it was and sweet. I hope you update A.S.A.P.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping you would review me because you're one of my favourite RoLo authors :D