

Date: 12-17-05 - 01:26 am Title: A morning jog
Good start .I like it alot.

Date: 10-06-05 - 09:14 am Title: Never the time
I've really enjoyed how you encompassed so much of the comic in this. And the soul mates idea is so incredibly wild. I really liked this, the whole concept. Very nice. And what an original character your Jack is!

Date: 10-06-05 - 08:57 am Title: continiued circles
I thought I reviewed this but see I didn't. Don't know why because when I read it the first time I was totally blown away with the way you made their connection through the ages. In fact, I was thinking why didn't I think of that? Really. I like the way you make things so different. And Jack Mitchell? Isn't he the guy in your latest story? Very intriguing character.
Author's Response: Thank you Darlin, and yes he is... I'll use him from time to time like a sort of Uata the watcher in the "What if's" I got the idea from reading the Ultimate X-Men when Logan told Ororo that he and jean were old souls and added alittle Romani belief mixed into it as well.

Date: 10-04-05 - 10:20 am Title: Never the time
Intersting, how you combined the Helen of Troy. I liked the story, Great Job!

Date: 10-03-05 - 08:21 pm Title: Never the time
I really liked it, unique and interesting and thouroughly enjoyable!!!

Date: 10-03-05 - 07:11 pm Title: Never the time
gessh. very interesting connection and idea of past lives. different from the norm.

Date: 08-29-05 - 10:09 am Title: continiued circles
ooohh! More! More! Soulmates, this is so interesting. :D

Date: 08-28-05 - 05:24 pm Title: continiued circles
Soulmates!!! Yes!!! More soon, I am loving this! (I like Jack a lot!)

Date: 08-28-05 - 04:22 pm Title: continiued circles
i just wanted to say i am impressed by Jack's abilities. i know it is hard to create abilities that are not repetative, but you've done quite well. i like jack! lol, and i like this chapter! the flash back is very foretelling

Date: 08-28-05 - 03:52 pm Title: continiued circles
Wow....nice way you included the egyptians with the Rose-'Ro link. Poor Kurt...he can't seem to get over it. Can't blame him though. He was a priest till a little time ago...and then there's Ororo on one hand and now Rachel too, who had a serious crush on him. Looking for another update!! Soon!!
Author's Response: I actually got the egyptian idea from a story I read by "the mad tenchi" called "His Eyes" on fanfic and asked her if I could use some of the ideas she came up with. If you haven't read it please do.

Date: 08-26-05 - 02:39 pm Title: Lives Lived
MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!

Date: 08-26-05 - 11:55 am Title: Lives Lived
'Ro is the reincarnated Rose? Holy crap. Update ASAP!!!

Date: 08-26-05 - 10:16 am Title: Lives Lived
Hmmmm. Interesting twist! Ororo was Rose in another Life? Keep it coming. And I like how you write your action scene. :D

Date: 08-26-05 - 10:16 am Title: Lives Lived
Hmmmm. Interesting twist! Ororo was Rose in another Life? Keep it coming. And I like how you write your action scene. :D

Date: 08-26-05 - 08:01 am Title: Lives Lived
YOU WANT FEEDBACK???!!!
Stop cutting the damn story at the good parts! LMAO! *grumbles* friggin' cliffhangers always when the good stuff comes into play. damn authors. lol.
Author's Response: yeah but it keeps you coming back....