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Reviewer: batman_wolverine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-05 - 03:58 pm Title: Love

Hey..u left it in the middle!! You gotta work on it..

Author's Response: actually I wanted to leave it that way...leaves it open and guessing.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-05 - 06:32 pm Title: Love

Get ready for the lynch mob - lol! I thought it was done very well - loved the twist at the end. I always like a good twist to surprise us.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-05 - 04:28 pm Title: Love

Hey what happened? Dreams? Drugs? Shapeshifters? What? Tell me...

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-05 - 03:35 pm Title: Love

WTF! Oh no you don't! You can't finish it there. I am expecting a sequel :D Good job!

Author's Response: I'm not finished yet but it may be a few days b4 I write another chapter

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 10:04 am Title: curves

Just when the good parts really starts you go and stop! :D Hurry! Update!

Author's Response: well wait for the next chapter...you may scream later

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 05:01 am Title: curves

You already know I'm really enjoying this story. You have some of the sweetest moments. I have to say you missed some of the tenses towards the end but I should've brought that to your attention a little better, was a little lazy so late at night. Excuses aside will try to do better should there be a next time! ;-D

Author's Response: Don't worry I got lazy too. So the exuse is mine :P

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 07:09 am Title: curves

Why'd you stop? I mean just when we're getting somewhere? C'mon I need more! Update ASAP. I'm really liking this!

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 11:56 pm Title: curves

Nice sappy chapter....Looks like you're done for this fic, or is there more? If this one is done, when do you start a new one?....and try to get a Beta. Other than that....way to go!!

Author's Response: I'm not done yet...but will take a break for a couple of days though.

Reviewer: Digital Tempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 03:09 am Title: Enter the Phalanx

It was very good, and this ending for this chapter had me hanging on to my seat. Great job.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 01:41 am Title: A morning jog

so your writing you own sub plots of sorts for these event if thats thee case then your doing a damn fine job sorry for the miss understanding

Author's Response: no biggie

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 08:09 pm Title: Enter the Phalanx

kinda confusing seems like your jumping for storyline to storyline but interresting

Author's Response: well what i'm going for is actually the major events in X-Men history. Each one involves Wolverine in some way....now from here I will deviate somewhat to fit the idea I have.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 08:01 pm Title: Enter the Phalanx

So much action and drama! Two of my favorite things! Now we just need some in depth on the emotions Wolverine and Storm have for each other and I will be a happy camper. :D Update soon!!

Author's Response: I will get there but I'm not that good at sex scenes.....well life is a learning experience.

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 09:43 am Title: A letter

Wolvie!!!!!!!!! Stop running and come back to get your woman. I love the letter, so hurry and Update!

Reviewer: Digital Tempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 12:29 am Title: A letter

I am thoroughly enjoying what I've read of your story so far. You've captured so much of their comic essence, and for that, I salute you. And reading Forge's proposal retraction in this story reminded me just how sad it was when I read the comic. With your added interpretation of the event, it makes it even sadder. Well done, I'll be waiting to see more. :)

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 11:08 pm Title: A letter

Yes Logan, come back soon...come and get your girl. LOL. This was short, but I guess I can forgive you because it was so sweet. But a chapter of this lenght will NOT be acceptable next time. And I'm serious. :::grins:::

Author's Response: I do promise that the next one will be longer and some what darker to a point. Right now I'm having someone beta it for me.

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