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Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 07:19 pm Title: A letter

He'll be back soon, right? I can not wait for your next update!! Hurry, I will be anxiously awaiting with baited breath. I don't wanna turn blue...

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 07:11 pm Title: Blood and sanity

I am really enjoying this. It Marvel only had this much sense. They have set up so much potential with these two, but they refuse to follow through. I absolutely love what you've done with their potential. I can't wait to see what else you have for us.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 07:01 pm Title: A letter

great letter....now please update with a longer chapter and get his ass back in town.

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 09:47 am Title: Blood and sanity

Keep writing! Hurry and Update! I want ot see the outcome of this. :D

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 01:08 am Title: A morning jog

He is the best at what he does isn't he. That was funny. I think I'm really going to enjoy reading this story. Great job. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 11:50 pm Title: Blood and sanity

So I'm caught up with all the chapters and am still intrigued. I would recommend a beta or proofing a little more prior to posting to prevent small typos such as studders for stutters. And I know I said I'd try to not harp on the typos but I must mention that you had SKIRT where you probably meant SNIKT when Logan's claws came out. HOWEVER, because you seem to be an update diva I can't complain overly much. Let me say I like the pace you have and especially liked the last line a lot - his dreams were her - really lovely and Stormcrow (cool name, a bit LotR-ish). So Stormcrow welcome to the Realm, glad you're here!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 11:26 pm Title: Faithless decisions

Love the wording you have for much of this. There are typos which I'll try not to mention again but it's the way you phrase a perspective that I love especially how Jean felt like an intruder in their world.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 11:19 pm Title: Blood and sanity

Great chapter...especially the way you have used the 'plane' scene and subsituted Ororo there. Looking forward to when Logan returns in your next update.....hope it is soon.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 11:02 pm Title: A morning jog

I like this approach you have as if we're there with them in the present. I like the era you're writing in a lot and how you seem to know the comics well which is always a wonderful bonus. I will say there're a few mistakes in composition however since this seems to be your first story and written some time ago it's nothing to complain about. I quite enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to the next few, see you just updated too!

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 11:00 pm Title: Blood and sanity

Ok, now you're just toying with us. Longer chapters!! Seriously, i get all involved them pfft... I like what I'm reading!! :D i just wish I was reading more of it!!

Reviewer: windrider1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 09:45 pm Title: Faithless decisions

I hate that guy! Ewww, I hate that guy. Grr... Yeah, post more so I can get the bitter taste of forge outta my mouth. :)

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 06:47 pm Title: Faithless decisions

great chapter love the inner battle with storms feelings but what does wolverine think post more

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 05:38 pm Title: Faithless decisions

Great story development. You just need to work on your 'tenses', you seem to move from past(did) to present (does) midway through a sentence.....anyway, I am sure you will improve as your progress. Looking for a 'speedy' update.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 03:17 pm Title: words in the dark

Got me interested! More soon? Please?

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-05 - 09:41 am Title: words in the dark

OK! You need to hurry and update this! I want to see where this goes. Hurry! Hurry! :D

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