When are you going to update? I have been dying for more of this story because it is so good! Update soon, please or I'll just die :)

So, that's why I haven't heard from you. You coulda dropped an email... O.K., I know that isn't realistic in your condition. Just glad to hear that you're doing okay. I can't believe you managed to get all this out and you're sick. That's dedication. Excellent chapter. I like this. It's definitely something different from you. It has this whole creepy, eerie uber-scifi feel going. With the God's Hand and the freaky club (which still reminds me of a crazy La Vela. I'll be awaiting your update. After I email and stuff to see how you're doing.

::Swoons with envy of such talent:: Ahh, Tempest you are indeed a master weaver of intoxicating and enthralling tales. I anxiously await your next update. Please don't make me suffer. Hope you are feeling better soon. :D

This is simply wonderful. I am constantly amazed by your storytelling, and writing abilities. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. ;-)

::Applauds loudly:: You rock.... I mean wow.... I hope that someday I can write as well as you can. ::bows down:: Hope you feel better... when you're healthy and kickin', I know you'll write more chapters and faster... so you see, it is purely selfish motive that I hope you feel better. :-p j/k!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!!!

You already know who I think this possibly is. Don't know if I'm right, but I have a feeling that I am. If I'm right things ain't gonna go so well for Shaw. Not that anybody actually believes he would succeed at something crazy. I've leard that when it comes to your stories I shouldn't expect anything. I told ya I'd leave you a review here too.

You have to give me more of this. It's so dark and twisted even at this point. There's so many ways I could see this story going, but I want to see where you take me.