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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 08:38 am Title: Entr'acte: God's Hand

You do know how to write an intriguing story, Digital! Another superb effort that I'm dying to see what happens. I love the extra comic characters, Tom, Davis, etc. I love the premise. I love this story! And top that with such freakin' quick updates and I'm nearly, not quite, speechless. I don't know what's going on lately around here but everyone's updating so fast lately I can't keep up! Way to go!

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 08:27 am Title: Entr'acte: God's Hand

Hmmmm. I'm guessing that the "man" that Shaw is meeting with is the professor. Or maybe Apocalypse. Yeah that's a good guess. He's always up to something involving power. Or maybe it's Wolvie in disguise...he was at one point a secret agent....right? Okay now I'm confused, I've confused myself and you are not giving me any clues. I'm going to need you to update this ASAP. :::grins from ear to ear:::

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 08:27 am Title: Entr'acte: God's Hand

Hmmmm. I'm guessing that the "man" that Shaw is meeting with is the professor. Or maybe Apocalypse. Yeah that's a good guess. He's always up to something involving powr. Or maybe it's Wolvie in disguise...he was at one point a secret agent....right? Okay now I'm confused, I've confused myself and you are not giving me any clues. I'm going to need you to update this ASAP. :::grins from ear to ear:::

Reviewer: Sparkle (RnbwRvrGrl) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 03:05 am Title: Entr'acte: God's Hand

I hope everything backfires on him. Sebastian is such scum. Doesn't he know that it doesn't pay to be greedy. It may pay now. In the long run he'll pay for it.

Reviewer: Mon-Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 12:55 am Title: Entr'acte: God's Hand

So mad at you! You let me know you updated just so I can be even more crazy. This didn't answer any of my questions. It just gave me more questions like who is this scientist? What the heck is God's Hands? Whatever it is I know it won't be good for anyone if Sebastian and a mysterious man are involved. What is God's Hand? I really need to know. *instant messaging you right this moment*

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 12:46 am Title: Entr'acte: God's Hand

and so the plot thickens cant wait for more

Reviewer: RFTGod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Two

Uh-oh. She's been caught.Dun. Dun. DUUUNNN. Details still equal excellent. When do we get the next chapter again?

Reviewer: Sparkle (RnbwRvrGrl) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 05:41 am Title: Chapter Two

I know it's early, but I'm about to go on my daytrip. I'm waiting for the others to get ready. Another excellent chapter that's filled with promise. I can already see the small hint of attraction between Ororo and Logan, but what happens now that he knows she's an assassin. God's Hand sounds scary. Maybe it's just me.

Reviewer: ShastyMcNasty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter Two

Australian football is the shiznit. Had to say that. You've successfully killed Slipstream in a story. You should be proud of yourself. I know I am. I can onlyl imagine how mad Sebastian will be at Ororo when she tells him she failed. And God Victor is about as dumb as rocks. Come on now. Your computer can't be that bad.

Reviewer: Felina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-05 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter Two

I figured out why I keep seeing question marks instead of the quotations. It's the dumbest reason ever. Tell ya about it later. You're a slave to the details aren't you? You've just been too kind in showing every little thing. It's like watching a movie in written word. English teachers must love you. You definitely know how to show, not tell. Bwahaha!

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter One

It's absolutely fabulous! I love the way it's going so far even though I can't stand Creed. Glad to see a new story from you because you are an amazing writer!! Keep it up!

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 08:51 am Title: Chapter Two

wow, you write very well.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter Two

I wake up, roll out of bed, groggily turn on my computer and what do I find? A gift from the Tempest herself!! Fabulous update. I am so loving this story. An assassin 'Ro. Sweet! A trilogy!! Be still my rampaging blood pumper! ::Big ass grin:: I can't wait for more! You never disappoint!!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter Two

what fun! love the details amd tie-in to other characters less thought of like Cameron.

Reviewer: Felina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter One

Let me tell you how weird this site shows up on FireFox. It was still an excellent story even if I had to like at "?" for every quotation mark and apostrophe. I'm really interested in knowing how she actually became an assassin. I know you'll tell us though. You're good about that.

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