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Reviewer: xhollowx2003 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter One

Maybe now I can post a review. My browser seriously sucks.

Reviewer: Mon-Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter One

You write so many stories for me to love. I don't think I can pick a favorite anymore. Just when I think I've decided on a story I like the most by you you write another that leaves me awestruck. No fair. I like this. A lot. With a beginning like this one I can only imagine where you're going to take us with this story.

Reviewer: Rafikitikigod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter One

I got a dedication. Oh yeah! m/ Detail = awesome. You really did a good job of painting everything out for me. It was gritty and raw. Definitely like the hardcore!Storm. Update "BnP" *cough* Sorry got something caught in my throat.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter One

I was amazed at such dark detail and it all seems appropriate somehow. I can't wait for the next installation.

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter One

I believe we have another winner. You are amazing, I just can't get enough of your stories. Fan-tastical!!!!

Reviewer: stormcrow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter One

I enjoyed reading it and was drawn to the assassin Ororo. Would like to read more.

Reviewer: Windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter One

As always I am in awe of such talent. I was drawn in and thoroughly entranced from the get go. I love a dangerous Ororo and I can see where she'd be attracted to Vic. You added Shinobi, who I stll love even though I made him an ass in my story, and I hope we see more of him. I can not wait for an update, so stop reading the reviews and get typing!

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 10:26 am Title: Chapter One

WOW! Dark & Edgy Storm, me likes! I always liked Ororo with an edge, and I red your story on FFnet. and I thought it was great! :D I know this is going to be about my favorite couple Ro/Lo, but I still get a kick out of Ro/Vic being together. Maybe it's the whole psyco/maniac thing Victor has going for him. Ha! Ha! Great Job! And the details in the story had me seeing all the rooms that you described as clear as day.

Reviewer: ShastyMcNasty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter One

Just got home and read your email about your story. You know that I really like it so far.I really like the atmosphere that you painted. I can definitely see this multilevel club filled with rich people who can get any and everything their heart desires. I sort of see Sebastian Shaw standing on like this podium overlooking everything with this shit-eating grin on his face because that's the way he always seemed to me. I also liked how you portrayed Ororo. You always give her a unique flair as a writer. You add something new and complex to her character. I know you said you got her sass from Ultimate but I still imagine her with the 'tude she sported during her mohawk days (hahaha-that makes me think of that AFI song-I Wanna Get A Mohawk (But Mom Won't Let Me Get One). She was really sassy then. I still think you could've used a more hardcore song for a bondage club than Party in the Morgue. ;) Out of all that loud shit you listen to you pick PITM? I am shocked.

Reviewer: Sparkle (RnBwRvrGrl) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-05 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter One

This story is really shaping up well. I remember you showing it to me when it was just an idea. Look what you have done with it now. And you even have my Shinobi-san in it. *swoons* You're spoiling us with all these stories. Now I will annoy you on AIM for an update until you give me a sneak peek of the next chapter or somethin'. P.S. Do my eyes deceive? You haven't posted this at ffnet yet?

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