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Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-05 - 07:29 pm Title: Meeting the Kids

Oh shite!! Don't tell me one of the kids walked in on them. Ro should have known better... especially since the kids were awake. Um I like this story... it has a lot of potential. However, I noticed you have several grammatical errors and your descriptions of the setting, characters, etc. could be.... well, a little more descriptive. I would be happy to beta for you. Should you decide that you would like to have a beta, please e-mail me at thewindrider278@yahoo.com. Other than that, I think you have amazing ideas and can't wait to read more of this story.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-05 - 04:33 pm Title: Meeting the Kids

Update soon....kick Creed to the curb...and Silver too.

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-05 - 03:43 pm Title: Meeting the Kids

Kid's, will catch you in the act every time. Well when do we have the big fight between Victor & Logan, Ororo & Silver Fox. Should be interesting. Love the kiddies. :D

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-05 - 09:20 am Title: Welcome Back

Now, we are getting somewhere! Twins! We let the real drama begin. :D

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 11:42 pm Title: Welcome Back

Oh Logan, and by the way, these are your two children. Wow, talk about coming out of left field! Ro finds out her love is alive and well. He finds out they have kids. My, my... I wonder if Logan is the fainting type? Good job! I like what I'm reading so far!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 08:11 pm Title: Welcome Back

yowzer. i can't wait until she begins explaing about the twins.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-05 - 07:59 pm Title: Welcome Back

More updates...NOW!!! Please.

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-05 - 06:51 pm Title: Hiding In The Bushes

interresting very nice

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 04:03 pm Title: Secrets

I think I am a little confused. I understand the whole thing about Silver Fox, but why would Remy tell Ororo that Logan died and he knew that he wasn't? Was this part of his cover?

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-05 - 03:12 pm Title: Secrets

Look damnit! i don't think i can ttake all these cliffhangers *calms down* (just kidding. :) can't wait for more!

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